The Other Side of the Fire

Kathy walked out of the movie theaters in a crying rage. As she walked down the street the theater starts to creak. Then it collapses in on its self. That will show them. There not going to mess with me ever again. This whole town im going to drag it to hell.

Are you going to make this into some sort of Novel/short story? I hope you do. With that tiny paragraph you captured my attention. It sounds like something I would read. I can't decide if Kathy is supposed to be a good guy or a bad guy. Or maby girl...

Really awesome and all, only one tiny thing...
Kathy reminds by sound the name Carrie, Stephen King's first book, about an unpopular girl who eventually burns half the town to the ground, any relations?

Hello! Here to review. There really isn't much to review, but oh well!(:

Selvetrica wrote:Kathy walked out of the movie theaters This should be "theater" in a crying rage. As she walked down the street, the theater starts to creak. Then it collapses in on its self. That will show them. There not going to mess with me ever again. This whole town im going to drag it to hell.

Well, I am very interested in this. I want to know why she thinks so. What's going to happen? You did a good job at grabbing someone's attention. The only thing that bothers me is that I wish it was longer. Is this the beginning of a chapter? Or prologue? I'm not sure.

Keep up the good writing! Write on!(:

-Katie.

SymphonyofSilence:yes i will im going to make it up as i go along so it should be interesting where it goes i would love suggestions

SubjectBlue:i have read that book loved it but it will have a small connections maby just a refrence

kr1117: this is prologue it will be longer

i might as well tell you whats this going to be about it is kinda like a X-men thing without the team where there are mutants but people are very preduace to them i kinda have a out line but i dont know where this will go

ok im still learning about this sight do i just post my next chapter(it will be loonger) here