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I Am You...

Shine · 2006-04-08T07:17:58Z

I don’t really write poems. So this is one of my first proper poems (I guess it is) I ever wrote. So comment… :) I Am You… I am your perception, your knowledge I am your comrade, your virtuous friend. I am a benediction to the living world, an oblation by the Lord. I am not obstinate. Obsession can build in me But I have no flaw. I am something necessary to you. I am your eternal flame. I make you commendable, Demeanor depends on me Prediction is what I can tell. I give you the elegant feeling I propagate in youself the ability I am authentic. I am not an immigrant I am you… your mind.

Should I really continue writing poems,I mean what do you think can I write poems?

Yes: 10; 100%

No: 0; No votes

: Total votes : 10

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Thu Nov 09, 2006 6:25 am

Shine says... · Thu Nov 09, 2006 6:25 am

Thanks Patrick!

"A good plot is like a dream.If you dont write down your dream on paper the moment you wake up,the chances are you'll forget it and it'll be gone forever"-Roald Dalh.

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I Am You...

Should I really continue writing poems,I mean what do you think can I write poems?

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