Disgrace to Wolf Picture 1

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I don't think this turned out too well. It's not very polished. I just needed an image of the characters... 'cause I love them so much :3

The guy on the left is the son of a dragon. The guy calls the girl "Wolf" but it'll really make the mot sense if you've read the story.

Oh, my.

Why is his face disfigured? Who are these people? Wait--those are wolf markings? Huh?

I'll read the actual story later, review day kinda has me in a rush right now. ;3

...I'm always impressed by those talented (or hard-working) people who can actually draw, well, people. Humans are hard to draw. Why is that? Is it because we have so many features? Because it's so hard to get the proportions right? *ponders*

I'm not sure the writing on the picture makes sense. Maybe it would if I read the story, but..... I can understand why it's there, but I guess my problem with it is that it's kinda a fragmented sentence.

...this is kinda cute. (Why am I using kinda so much? O.o)

I think the lines on the guy's neck are a bit too dark, but I can't really tell if that's part of of the wolf effect or not. And the neck seems a tad longish, but maybe you wanted to draw it that way? I can't tell.

*cough* You show cleavage on the girl, but there's not roundedness to show where her breasts are. Is the shirt just that loose? Because this way, it's a bit hard to tell if it's a short-haired girl, or a boy, and you're showing the line of his chest.

Anyway, pretty good job.

Holy! That guy on the left is absolutely freaky looking! I mean... yeah. He looks happy enough, and the guy to his right seems happy too... but I am pretty sure that the cute guy to his right is grimacing in pain because the guy on the left is stepping on his foot... or something. In fact, this may just be me, but the guy one right looks a bit too strained... see the lines in his neck? Maybe he's just pretending to look happy?

In any case, your characters look really interesting! Well... more of the left guy, but the right guy looks pretty cute, so I'm not complaining. ;D

What are their names? Or do I need to read the story for that?

The orange eye REALLY caught my attention O_O I like it, but in order for the pic to balance you might need to do some more vivid coloring on the rest x)
Again, love the scales.
Not so sure about the scar. It looks like some sort of burn mark, but usually those are redder and not so brown. So whatever injury this guy has, I'd look up reference pics to get it realistic.
The hair could be colored smoother, right now it looks rough. The dark strands starting at the top of the guy's head don't watch up with the direction of his bangs. Instead of drawing hair in a block shape, I highly reccomend you going strand by strand at first. It'll make the hair sections look like they are placed right, and then at the end you can erase the extra lines you don't need
I notice you drew two lines on their necks, but I don't know what they are indicating. I don't think anyone has very prominent necklines. Honestly, I would suggest erasing them, the skin would look much cleaner without.
Without the line for cleavage, I would've thought she was a dude. I think the stiff collared shirt and the haircut make her look that way.
I didn't mean for this to be such a negative review! D: I love these people, whoever they are ^_^
Keep drawing!!!

Is the fellow on the left supposed to look like a wolf? I'm not sure... why title this "Wolf" and have him look like a snake?