Characters in my next novel =)

This was supposed to be my characters in my next novel. Hope you'll like it



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Ooers, I want to see bigger heads of theirs!

Nice work here! You can definitely see their personalities with their eyes, especially the girls. The guys mostly look brooding, but I guess brooding guys are the cool things to have.

I think you should definitely have labels to your characters though... that way, when your readers look at this, they can say, "Oh, that's so and so!" I mean, they might know anyway because of your character development, but if you like to go slow in this area (I know I do!) it might be better to put names on them.

Also, your next picture should include the rest of their bodies, lol!

Nice work.

haha lol ! They are not the characters in my Reomi novel I have posted here on YWS. They will be on my next one.
I am glad you like it ! All have different personalities there. Shy, Clumsy, Serious, and etc.!

Thank you again! by the way, I'll try to post drawing with BODIES ! hehe

And by the way the first two male characters supposed to be twins.! The next story I am about to post is about the twins

Uh oh... as a twin myself, I can say with certainty that twins with their heads together are in no way to be trusted! It's just bad news for all.

Anyway, knowing this bit of information, it seems that the twin on the left is the good, idealistic twin whereas the twin on the right is more brooding and dark. Am I correct? I may be seeing this wrong because I have a story (not written yet!) with twin brothers too, and that is their personalities summed up... >.>

You GOT it right !. I am excited to write this one but first, I need to finish my first novel. Can you review it? My drawing skill is much better than my writing! haha I know you can notice some grammatical errors in this post. Much more in my novel.

*drools over your art* I envy you. So polished... So professional looking... My doodles are shameful in comparison. XD

Your drawings are beautiful!! How do you do that? I draw anime too but I am not nearly as good... I can see your characters personalities just by looking at their faces. The eyes, hair, faces, and everything about your drawings are amazing!! Especially the eyes... I could stare at them for the better part of the day. You could be a professional manga-ka or something. Please post drawings with their bodies and names!

Waaa

I like it vury vury much! I see you're good at head positioning. Waa, I wish I could do that! For the most part my heads just generally stay straight forward because I can't to the whole "squished eye" thing on the other side of the head ;P and oh my gosh! The eyes! Oh the eyes, how wonderful ;P

I love how the eyes show the emotions in the faces. Also, they are so clean and not sketchy looking, and look like they were done on a computer. Very well done, indeed! ;D I think the only suggestion I have on these is that you should darken the outlines on the hair because either it's the lighting, or the fact that it's a photo, but the hair just seems to be vague or disappeared :O

Did you start out by using reference pictures, or did you teach yourself how to draw the eyes and hair and such? I started out by finding pictures that I liked and looking at them while drawing them. It's very helpful, and you can learn a lot from it, but if you didn't do that and just learned on your own, then that's amazing!

I would definitely like to see more! :3

Hey Paulop,
I didn't know you drew too! That's cool (I can't draw for my life so that makes you even special-er ) Also, good job on the eyes. They look really nice.
I think you did a great job on these and I didn't see any problems with them, so good job.

Keep drawing (and writing!),
Alzora

They look like concept art for a video game, man. I'm interested in the story already. The eyes really do convey a lot of emotion...it's like they're looking right at me...

Anyway, excellent job!

paulo!!
since when did you drew anime!? (they're sooooooo cool)
the foolish smiles, the eyes with so much emotions and the details of their faces
argh! why am i not gifted with that skill?? haha

i'll tell our formers classmates that our beloved first honor student was gifted with drawing skills..
hahaha

@jenmarie You never knew! You just want NED NED NED or RALPH RALPH RALPH!
I was never discovered! Anyway, I am just good at sketching... I am not good in coloring

I like the characters, their eyes especially, they’re very expressive. Something I notice though is that none of them have any distinguishing marks (birthmarks, scars, ect...). If I saw these people on the street I may not recognize them. Maybe consider adding a unique trait to one of them.

paulo,.. hahaha!
i didn't say i always like NED And Ralph ..
i'm open with new artists..
especially if he was as great as you!
hahahahaha