Math Class Dreams

I wrote this in math class two years ago. The punctuation is probably wrong and I'm aware that hotness is not the most sophisticated word. I literally wrote it out of boredom.

This class is so boring,
I think I might die
This class is so boring,
I let out a sigh

This class is so boring,
Yet look at that guy
His hotness is equal to infinity times pi

Oh, why, oh why,
Can't I talk to this guy,
Who's hotness is equal to infinity times pi?

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I changed the 4th line from "I moaned to the sky" to "I let out a sigh" I'm not really sure if thats better but I didn't like that line

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If you are intrigued by the story (because I'm sure you are all on the edge of your seat) the guy was a junior and wanted nothing to do with the freshman in his class, like myself. I know, it's so sad.

This poem made me smile. I like the rhyming, and the subject is good.

This class is so boring,
I think I might die;
This class is so boring,
I moaned to the sky. This paragraph does not flow well. Maybe change the last line?

This class is so boring,
Yet look at that guy;
His hotness is equal to infinity times pi. XD

Oh, why, oh why,
Can't I talk to this guy,
Who's hotness is equal to infinity times pi? Great question and great ending.

Overall, very cute, and just needs a little work.

Haha! Yay, math class!

I think you should totally describe the guy more and use all these mathematical innuendo to make it more interesting. So, maybe you can write about what you would like to say to him (but don't) and that might be very interesting! Combine that with some math pick up lines in poetic form (haha, so, so geeky!) and this might be an even funner (shhh, that's totally a word!) poem.

Oh, and hotness is totally a word. Totally. *nods*

Ahahaha, this was a cute poem. It made me smile.
I know exactly how you must have been feeling while writing this poem.. especially with math class I just can't pay attention. My eyes are wandering all over the place, and my mind is anywhere but on the lesson : P
So yes, I can relate.
Anyways, back to the poem. I thought it was written okay. To me it seemed more like just a fun and casual poem. You word choice was more casual as well (for example:hotness, ahahahha). Also, there wasn't a whole lot of substance to this poem. It was just simple. However, I liked the way you wrote it. I would leave it. If you were to change anything, then I would maybe add to it a bit. Other than that, loved the poem!

Grrr, I can't stand those arrogant juniors! Anyway, I really like this poem! It's cute and sweet, and the rhymes are fun and catchy. I'm envisioning someone scribbling this down in their notebook during math class, while the teacher rattles of a long equation and everyone just sighs as he gets to the fifth step. Too much? Maybe, but that's what I'm thinkin of! haha. Seriously though, adorable little poem. I like it a lot
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