Sincerely, Brain

Okay this is rather humorous. This is what we all think after heart break, but we never listen. Stupid heart always jumps forward. I think it's rather a cliche poem, (or maybe I just read it somewhere?) Anyway, nothing that I find really distressful except it broke my heart that you didn't use exclamation points after "LISTEN". Heehee, I'm a fan of using them. Other than that I can't find anything wrong.

Tootle-loo,
Nana

First of all, your title was what drew me to this. And now I understood why this has so many likes. It's beautifully written. Even though it's relatively simple, it's effective and works well for what you're trying to say. What makes it so mesmerizing is that so many people have felt this way before; everyone has probably come across a moment when they wished they'd followed their head instead of their heart. Very well done to you; a very well written piece.

Gah, this was amazing! You're a great poet. That's all I can say.

--Lollipopper

I can't find anythign wrong with it! I relaly like it, it ezpresses a lot of emotion which I like. I have trouble doign this but your, your a pro, you excel in this. At least this is what i think from teh poem. I love it! love it! love it! Also What I like about it is it expesses a lot of feelings and still is short and sweet. Great job! Keep writing because your a pro at it!

Bravo!