Make Believe

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For once in our life.
We had a moment to hold,
to make a difference,
a story to unfold,
a truth to reveal,
a lesson to be learned
from the mistakes we made.
The secrets and lies,
and the words unsaid.

Wasting precious tears,
for those who never loved,
and for those who'll never care.
Fighting back the fear,
of what if they leave us?
Alone and halfway, in times unfair.

Maybe they had promised,
that they'll be with us all through.
All ups and downs, in depressed times,
to face circumstances so harsh, untrue.

But promises were never meant to be kept.
And we're left with our heart badly broken.
For they were mere words, with little hint of heart.
So fake, when they were spoken.

All so sudden, we found that we are
in the middle of nowhere,
and reality hits hard.
But maybe thats the right time,
for a brand new start.

So, keep on saying
to yourself, you're not heart, no, you're not.
You're just been playing,
or being foolishly over smart.

'Cause this little lie will bring you the faith
of starting all over again, on your own.
You need no help, no, you don't.

So what, you're alone?
So what, you don't have friend?
Or, someone to love?
You'll survive, its not the end.

Believe in your own, or
even if its impossible, just make believe.
You're not a loser, you're only waiting
for your chance, for a reason to live.

Dream for yourself,
'cause they are not only meant for sleeping.
Wish for yourself,
'cause they might come true if you don't stop believing.
Love yourself,
its not always others showing you how.
Live for yourself,
what if others don't need you now?

Or better if you've got somebody
who loves, cares and lives for you.
Don't ever let them go.
For diamonds they are, who make your life aglow.

Sadness, happiness, stays and goes.
But memories never fade, even when time flows.
Don't hold on to time, just let it go.
You too, would have the time of your life
just make believe, and don't stop believing so.
Are you living for the things you are praying for?




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Very detailed, I love it!

~Pixie2~
All you need is faith, trust, and a little bit of pixie-dust!




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Hello! Very well done. I'm becoming a fan of your work! Keep it up! I loved the concept and your poem is very well written, though I would say words such as 'cause and loser sound slang and give the poem an unrefined edge which I don't think suits the piece. Just my opinion. Perhpas that's what you intened as regards style. Other than that critisism, very good. Bravo. *like* from me. Keep writing
~ Am :)




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Amazing.. adn very vibrant.. and lively the mood is sad, but hopeful.... keep up the good work!.
ROmanic Writer




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Standing ovation!!!! :D:D:D i like it very much :D:D
<3 Princess of Neverland <3



Those who cannot remember the past are condemned to repeat it.
— George Santayana