Return to Wonderland *Not accepting anymore Descendants*

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The Blue Prince

I picked up a puzzle piece and studied it; I had been on this same peice for hours but I just couldn't find where it fit. I would set it down, work on the rest of the puzzle for a while, and then come back to it later, but I could not place it! "The thing aught to be burned," I growled. I told myself to stop acting childish and went on to another section in the puzzle.

A knock on the great oak door caused me to look up from my 10,000 peice puzzle and glare at the door, "What do you want?" I said, angry at being desturbed. The door opened and one of my stewards stepped inside.

"Sorry to desturb you, sir--" (glare from me) "I mean, your magesty," He clears his throat. "But I have the results from two of your spies."

Suddenly more interested, I straightened and folded my hands, giving the man my full attention. "Continue."

He nodds, "Drew Iversen tells us that he over heard a group of forest dwellers mention Alice." The steward pauses to see my reaction; the girl, Alice, has always been a simble of freedom, like the people's messiah. I wasn't worried and motioned for the man to continue. "Alice, and something about a quest. And your other spy, Jack Spade concludes this story. He says that the Queen is sending a reqrute of Waistcoats to Earth." Another pause. "With orders to find Alice's descendants and bring them here."

The hall is silent for awhile. "So the Queen has reduced to sending for help; and she sends children," I scoff. "However, give orders to Iversen and Spade to keep an eye on this quest of there's. And pay both of them they're month's wages." The man bows. I stop him before he leaves, "Is there anymore news?"

"We have conqured another city, my lord. The city of Giggerum."

"Fabulous," I admire the wicked blade of my sword, Jigsaw. "You may leave me now."

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Raven

I stroaked my Tichamar's neck and tried to wait patiently for the Alice descendants. The Waistcoats were sent out yesturday for them and should be getting here any moment now. I had been sitting here for almost an hour, waiting, so that I could help ascort them to the White Queen's castle. After a quick rest over night, we would be heading out on a quest to defete the Blue Prince. The Queen asked me to lead the quest, I was honored and willing to accept the opertunity to be apart in the war. If only they would get here!

Impatiently, I glanced down at my pocket watch; the watch ticked in an uneven fashon and the hands turned the wrong way. But I knew the time anyway. "They're late," I grumbled to myself. Snapping the watch shut, I reached up to tuck it in the pocket of my hat, but my hand found nothing sitting on top of my head. I felt frantically around my orange head of hair, but the hat was gone. After finding that it was no longer here, I crossed my arms and said, "Chesere! Give my hat back you mangy creature."

The crazy cat appeared above my head and I glared at it. "No, my dear, I think I shan't. I quite like the hat," he said in his soft, but slightly eerie voice.

I swiped at the hat in his hands but he had floated just out of reach. "Come on, Chesere!"

"Tut tut, are we begging like a dog now?"

"Oh, you! Come a little bit closer and we'll see who'll be begging!"

Just then, a flash of light came through the big hole that was in the side of the hill. I grabbed my hat and placed it on my head while the cat was destracted. "They're finally here," I mumbled to myself. I placed my hands on my hips and waited to see who would walk out of the hill.

>Ok peoples, those who have an Alice descendant, your first post should be about the Waistcoats finding you and falling down the hole to Underland. When everyone has fallen down the hole we'll go to the Queen's castle and rest up/eat. And then our quest will begin!
As for you who have Underland Dwellers, just do whatever you want. Maybe you're watching the Descendants enter into your world, or whatever.<
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Issac

I watched Isabel dance around in our small front yard and smiled when she came up to me. "Hey," I laughed as she pulled at my arm in a plea to play.
"Tell me a story," she begged and gave me a loving blue eyed stare. "Duper says she wants to here one too."
I try not to frown at her mention of voices. It's not just the normal imaginary friends of a ten year old. "Who's Duper?" I ask, acting like I'm playing along.
"She's a rabbit like the one from Alice in Wonderland." She waves over toward the bushes and smiles up at me.
I glance over, not taking any real notice in the surroundings. I only looked back when I thought I saw ears appear just over the shrub. I take Isabel's hand and walk toward the bush. "Once upon a time..." I thought of another storyline, taking many ideas from Louis Carrol as I looked around the bush. "There was a rabbit..."
Isabel began taking off with her own storyline, and I let her with an easy smile. "What did Duper say?" I asked as I found a hole where one hadn't been yesterday. It was too big for a rabbit, but Isabel has a way of explaining things that no one else can.
"That she needed your help."
"Me?"
"Yep. She says I can't go with you, but she'll get you back to me soon. It'll be like no time has passed at all."
"Really?" I grew nervous, despite the knowledge that my sister's mind wasn't based in reality. "What do I need to help her with."
"Why don't you ask her?"
I look away from Isabel and blink.
A dressed rabbit with a little rabbit smirk on its face. It smiled at Isabel and spoke, "Thank you, my dear. I'll take it from here."
Isabel hugged my legs and skipped away. "Bye, Issac."
I shook my head. "Isabel!"
"She'll be fine, dear. Come with me."
I glared down at the rabbit, taken out of my zone. "Where?"
It motioned toward the hole. "Underland, of course." It jumped down the hole, and I followed, of course.
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Caspian:

I spotted a flash of tan, and it immediately caught my attention. Whiping my head to face it, I saw what looked like a tan rabbit with a white nose in a wasitcoat. He looked at me, and then ran off.

Immediately, my curiosity took over and I got up to follow the rabbit. Swiftly, I scooped my hair up into a ponytail, tucked my gray hat into my jeans pocket, and then darted towards the direction of the rabbit. When I rounded the corner, there it was again, waiting for me. Then it was off again.

Determined to catch it, I persisted in following. The little rabbit led me to the woods and was waiting near a hole in the ground.

The tan rabbit nodded at me and then said, "I'm Darby, follow me."

And with that, Darby jumped into the hole. Many may think me crazy, heck, I even did, but I didn't even take a second of consideration before I jumped into the hole after Darby.

As I fell, I felt like it would never end. But the depth wasn;t the crazy part about it: things started to pass me. Things like books, a piano, a tea kettle, etc.

What seemed like about ten minutes later of bewilderment, I finally hit the ground, only to realize that I was on the ceiling. I then fell to the ground, the hole now disolved or something. I looked around and stood, approaching doors. I tried to open each, but each were locked. (I kinda just wanna skip the whole small big thing. Is that okay?) Finally, I pushed aside a red curtain, which revealed another door. Quickly, I pushed it open, and it worked.

I went through the door, cloing it behind me, and came to face a crazy looking girl in an awesome hat and a floating cat, surrounded by flowers with faces and cockamanie creatures.

"I must have hit my head while chasing that rabbit." I muttered to myself
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Blue:

I sat on the patio of my house, strumming at my guitar, trying to figure out the chords to a song. Suddenly, a rabbit appeared and it snatched my guitar from my hands.

Not even realizing that I must be crazy if a rabbit just stole my guitar, I chased it.

The rabbit would stop every now and then, waiting for me to catch up, until finally, it jumped down a hole.

Determined to get my guitar back, I jumped into the hole.

The things I saw were insane, so I shut my eyes tight until I landed with a thud.

After a minute, I opened my eyes and saw that I was surrounded by door.

Hoping one was the way back home, I tried everyone, but none of them worked. It was the last door I reached that worked. So I twisted the brass knob and pushed the big door open. Quickly, I closed it behind me and turned to face two guys, three rabbits, a floating cat, and a crazy, red-headed, green-eyed girl in a hat.

Immediately, I turned and tried to open the door back up, liking it much better in there, but it was locked.

Gulping, i turned back around, and spotted the rabbit who took my guitar.

"Give it here now!" I exclaimed, approaching him.

The rabbit handed me back my guitar and said, "Sorry 'bout that, but I tried to get your attention for twenty minutes, but you were too absorbed in the guitar, so it was the only option left."
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That's great you guys, I love your posts (you make me so proud), but I'd just like to let you know that your journey through the hole doesn't have to be exactly like it was in the movie/story. You can be totally unique and origonal. Make up your own crazy adventure through the hole, have fun! :D
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Well in that case, I'll edit my posts. But I'll do it tomorrow or the day after, since tomorrow is easter, cause I'm beat
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No, it's ok, fiction! I didn't mean that you HAD to do something different, I was just making sure you knew you didn't have to do the same thing as it was in the movie.
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Drew

"Pawn moves two, bishop check king, knight take bishop, rook move three, Queen take bishop..." I was muttering to myself again. Whenever I play chess this always happens. It's not like I'm crazy or anything (at least I don't think so). It helps to keep my mind preoccupied and not thinking of my depressing past.

I finished my game and sat, staring at the wall. It was really early in the morning, just before the sun rose. The village would be crawling with people in the next hour or so. The lone candle bore little light, but I didn't care. I thought, let my mind wander a bit, and it stumbled upon a simple thought. Bolting out of my chair, I pull on my boots and jacket and leave out my back door.

I had just remembered that I was supposed to update the Blue Prince on what was going on in the village. If he didn't get his information soon, who knows what he'll do. I stroll along the streets, my ears open and picking up every sound. I heard many different conversations about his majesty. They were all good, all except for one man.

I walk closer to him and listen in on the conversation.

"The Blue Prince, my dear. He's ruining our whole life," the man said. "Don't you see that we were better off when he wasn't in power?"

"Hush. There are spies everywhere. You shouldn't be talking like this. Please stop." a lady begged him.

"I don't care," the man replied, standing at full height. "I'm not scared of anyone. You know what, I hope that someone hears me. That way, they can tell his majesty what I said. Maybe he'll change his ways."

I muttered, "Or not," as I walked away from the man. That was definitely a conversation that I was going to be passing onto the Blue Prince. As I trudged closer to the woods, that village got more and more empty. I caught glimpses of people peeking out their curtains, waiting for the sun to rise.

Suddenly, I heard voices. Looking up, I saw a tiny light shining in the woods. Two men were standing side-by-side, whispering. I had to get closer. What were they talking about, and why was this conversation happening before day break? Moving quickly, I hid behind a tree only a few paces from the two men. What I heard gave me great interest and a juicy story.

"Wait, did you say Alice?"

"Yes," the other man replied in a whisper. "At least that's what I've heard."

The first man hesitated. "But Alice is too old. Right? She could not fall down the hole once again."

"No, not THE Alice, her decendents. They've been summoned."

"By whom?"

"The White Queen of course. They're being sent on a mission."

"A mission to do what?"

The men perked up as they heard a sound. This sound even made me jump. Looking around quickly, they decided that it was too dangerous to continue, so they left. Cursing under my breath, I turn to see one of the Prince's stewards sitting next to me.

"Damn you," I said. "You scared away the story. I would've gotten more info if you hadn't come now." I got up and started walking back to my house. The steward got up and followed me.

"Sir, Drew, please tell me what you have to tell the Prince."

I sigh. "Just tell him that Alice's decendents are coming and they've been sent on a quest. What else, I don't know." And I shrugged him off and reentered my house. I felt like a failure. I should've been able to extract so much more information from that conversation. Oh well, all in a days work I suppose. I make myself some eggs, and sit down to finish my chess game.
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Alyssa

I looked up from my book and looked down towards the roots of my tree. That was the fourth time I'd heard someone beneath me. I closed my book and set it among the branches. Bracing myself, I swung my legs over a branch and jumped down. My bare feet made a soft thump as they hit the ground. I looked around, scanning the bushes surrounding the clearing.

"Who's there?"

My only response was a soft russling in the bushes. I smiled.

"Shadow, come on out. You silly cat." I called out to my little black cat.

"Meow," Shadow's little blue eyes peered at me questioningly as she climbed out from under an arching root. She couldn't have raced from the bushes ten yards away and dove under the root that fast. She jumped into my arms.

Together, we started forward, into the brush only to be stopped in our tracks. Was that a... pigtail? Any other day, I would have thought that it was just some little girl playing outside. And I had too. Until I spotted the tall rabbit's ear poking above the pigtail. Suddenly, I was bounding forward, Shadow hissing in my arms. She saw it too.

And then, we weren't running anymore. We were falling. I was clutching my struggling kitten as we fell. And for a split moment, I thought I saw a rabbit below me. A bunny...in clothes.
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The rain taps off the roof, dripping past my face and onto my bare feet. I never did mind the rain, but this had an eerie feel to it. I looked to the clouded sky, wishing I could get out of this institute. This was the first day they had let me out in weeks and yet I only sat on a porch near my dorm. I walk off the porch, feeling the rain sink across my back and plop into my hair. Warm spring rain. There was nothing like it.

"Luce! Lucie!" A small soft voice appeared in my ear.

I ingnored it. That's what my parents and the phycatrist had said. They weren't real. They didn't deserve my attention.

"Lucie! I come all this way and you ignore me? Well that's just plain rude!"

I knew that voice. It was one of the kinder ones, that that I always missed when it was gone. One that I had once known a face to. A face I hadn't seen in a while. A face that had brought me here. I turn around.

"Diana?"

Relief showed on the small rabbit's cute face. She was bigger than the last time I'd seen her and her sun dress was not the bright yellow she once would've worn. It was a softer blue. It suited her.

"You do remember!"

She rushed foward and hugged my knees. Although she was bigger, I was to.

"Diana. Please tell me you're real."

"As real as a talking rabbit can be."

She didn't even treat it as an odd question. I had so missed ones who believed me. A shiver went through me and I pushed Diana away.

"You shouldn't be here!" I hissed. "You're not real!"

"Oh Lucie." Diana bit her muzzle." What have they been teaching you?"

I back away, my mind growing fuzzy." You're just an "Imaginary friend" I never really knew you."

Diana plopped down, the rain wetting her ears down. "Lucie. Of course I'm real. I'm as real as Underland."

I breath in and out, trying to clear the mist of reality in my mind. Diana was real. She was. I could touch her, feel her.

"That's what you're here for, isn't it." It wasn't a question. "Underland."

Diana nodded. "I should let Raven tell you, she'll be angry with me if I don't. There's been some trouble. The fact is, you'll have to come with me. Down the rabbit hole."

I back away, blinking through the heavy rain.

"N-No. Diana. I'll go with you, of course. Anything to escape this place. I won't go through a rabbit hole. No hole. Ever. There has to be another way."

"You really are about to make things hard, aren't you?" She looked to the sky. "Fine. We're already a little late, so I'll just make a water portal. Grab my paw."

I oblige, feeling relief at being safe from a dark hole. Diana runs her hand through the air, seeming to dilute the rain. She mutters something I don't catch and the air rushes through me, swirling around me. The world becomes a whirlwind of colors, flying past me. The only thing I can feel is Diana's paw and a num sensation. Then it all ebbs away. I collapse to my knees on soft grass. I was free. I try to get up, but stumble. I feel someone try and hoist me up. Diana. She look's at me with black shiny eyes.

"Sorry about that. It's the hardest the first time around."

A voice comes from behind her. "Is this an Alice decendant?"

Diana swoops her arm aside to reval a brightly dressed girl with red hair. I felt dizzy.

"Yep. Lucie Caroll, meet Raven Hatter."

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I skipped outside my sketchpad and pencil case in one hand and my violin in the other my hat in my pocket. "Careful Celestria!" I heard Uncle Marcus call and I had to keep from rolling my eyes. I ran until I was under the oak tree in the corner of the yard. I dropped my violin case and sketchpad and leaned back closing my eyes. "Celestria." I heard someone call and I opened my right eye half glaring then both my eyes opened once I realized there was a rabbit in a waiedstcoat in front of me. I blinked then dropped my head in my hands groaning. "Mom was right I finally lost it." I groaned. "Um that's all well and good but we need to get moving." I heard the rabbit say. I sighed then got up grabbing everything. "Alright you know my name but I don't know yours." I said coolly following the rabbit. "Names Dilly." he replied hopping up to a hole. "Let me guess I have to go down there don't I?" I asked looking at Dilly. "That was the idea." He replied coolly. I sighed tucked my sketchpad in my pencil case and jumped placing my hat on my head as I did so. I thudded on the ground with a loud oof while Dilly landed upright. "So where am I?" I asked calmly standing up seeing a lot of white. "At the castle of the white queen." Dilly replied leading me inside.
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Alyssa

I looked up from my book and looked down towards the roots of my tree. That was the fourth time I'd heard someone beneath me. I closed my book and set it among the branches. Bracing myself, I swung my legs over a branch and jumped down. My bare feet made a soft thump as they hit the ground. I looked around, scanning the bushes surrounding the clearing.


"Who's there?" I called into the brush.

My only reply was a rustling from deep in the bushes. Curiously, I stepped forward. I thought I saw a flash of color. Now extremely curious, I took a few rushed steps forward. About three feet away from me, a creature stepped out of the shadows. A rushed examination revealed that it was a... Bunny in clothes. BUNNY IN CLOTHES??!! I did a double take but the figure was already rushing back into the brush.

I started running forward, tripping constantly. The supposed bunny kept going at steady pace. Suddenly, the figure dissapeared. I tried to stop but being the klutz that I.am, I tripped over a juttinng root. Suddenly, I errrrr to fall.. It felt like hours passed as I fell. I began to wonder f I would ever stop falling when I finally landed on my tailbone. I looked around at my strange new surroundings and wondered, Where am I?




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Charon

I smirked. The descendants had been claimed. Where I was crouched in the red and purple ferns beside the place-of-no-return, I could see them clearly. There was a lad with black girl's hair, a girl that had been previously frantically trying to get back her guitar, and a handful of others, mostly girls. My smirk grew wider. I could use them easier. Good. Then there was the rabbits and that odd hat-girl who didn't like me for some reason or another...

I shrugged, and then moved slowly through the underbrush, backing off a bit more, moving down wind. I'd seen the Cheshire Cat, that mockery of a fine British housecat, and I didn't want it catching on to the fact I was here. The thing was ruddy annoying.

I finally sat myself down and plucked a few of the flowers nearby. They whined (nearly soundless) as I plucked their petals off, but I put their seeds back so they couldn't be too peeved. The vines inched away a bit, however.

I grinned to myself and leaned back against a pine-like tree. ...Time to watch the show.
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The Angel

I flew overhead, my painstakingly bright wings making whooshing sounds, as the tiny wings of the Rocking-Horse Birds flitted around me, serene. Underland was beautiful, but dark and forboding at the same time. Things changed here, but they also stayed the same, to the dwellars at least. The dwellars hadn't seen an Alice in years, but at least Underland was peaceful, for now. The Blue Prince was taking too much control, as the Red Queen had done so long ago.

But the Waistcoats had been sent out; things where about to get interesting. And they had already brought back descendants. I was most interested in seeing them, mind you, but I had been looking for three moon phases (nights) and still hadn't seen the landing place.

Until now.

I found the Garden of Alice, just as a boy barrelled out of a rabbit hole, right behind a pudgy rabbit. There was Raven there too, her hat perched high atop her red head. I dove down quick, relishing every second that my glowing body reacted to the fierce wind.

My slight black feet landed on the ground. The boy aqquired a look of shock, one that I found odd, but still kind.

I was still wearing my ratty old clothes, but they worked for me. My bright black skin shone in the half sun. His eyes gleamed for a second. "Hello Raven," I said.
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