I have plenty of time to review...

Hey, I don't know if I'm the "best reviewer" but I like to review, and as I have plenty of time at the moment, feel free to ask.
I will review short stories, novels, lyrics, and poetry. I don't care for romance, or sci-fi, but I'll still review it!
Please don't ask for more than 3 poems, more than 2 short stories or more than 3 chapters. I will get to the stuff as soon as I can. (Now that sounds contradictory with my statement of having plenty of time, but still, I have a life!)

PS: If I don't give the best review, I apologize, will do the best I can, but if I miss something, it's because I'm still learning too. Oh, and if I usually speak my mind. So, if I say something that sounds harsh, it's not 'cause I'm trying to sound mean!

This is the prologue to my novel-in-stagnant-progress, and I'm not sure whether it's necessary or even readable. It's really short and basically dialogue-free. Please proceed to rip it to shreds Oh, and it's technically fantasy, but there's nothing really "magical" about the prologue, as it takes place on Earth.

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Hey! I wrote this about an organization im VERY passionate about and I want people to look into the organization and the story behind it. The thing im most afraid of is that it seems like im just trying to get people to donate and that is not the case. As much as i do hope people donate its more or less trying to get more people to be aware of the situation.
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review please thank you VERY much

Hey can you please review the first chapter of my short story? I would greatly appreciate it!

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post846932.html#p846932

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A review on my poem would be handy, if your up for it (:

Hi there,
if you want to review my poem
post916429.html?hilit=clouds#p916429

it is called "Clouds" and is about writers block [genre narrative poem]
Thanks, Oliver