I drew the one with the girl after seeing a rose and deciding to study how roses were shaped. The next I drew when I was asked to draw a dragon by a half-drunk adult at a barbecue. Tear them apart I apologise for the blurriness; the pictures were taken with an iPod.
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Hey, i have come to review. My internet is capped so only the dragon picture load. First this is first, i don't like your media. You obviously talented so why waste it on lined paper that isn't going to do your drawing any justice. You are obviously quite talented, your drawing was quite good but i do have some issues. Generally the picture works quite well but you need to work harder on shading, you are to reliant on outlining the inside of the body deserves more work and more detailed. Do not be afraid to use broken messy line, don't be afraid to add some more detail. Also the image is rather flat, different gradients of grey would be good. Anyway good work!
I don't draw, so I'm not going to critique about anything tecnical. I absolutly love the expressions on the dragons. Both convey lots of emotion. The girl is very pretty, but If you wanted to go more abstract it would be cool if you could incorporate the rose motif into her facial features.
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Hey Durrie. Cool drawings you have here. But I have to agree with Jennya. I don't particularly like your using of lined paper. I think a nice clear surface would have been far better to work with.
Secondly, on the picture of the girl with the rose in her hair, her proportions are off. The top of the head is suppose to be a lot bigger than that. Human proportions can be tricky for some to nail if you're not use to drawing them. When drawing the general shape of the head, the eye line should be a third of the way down. The rest should consist of the hairline and forhead. The forhead of an actual human being is pretty big. So the head of your drawing should obviously match the realism you were attempting to portray here.
Practice makes perfect. (Or at least your own personal version of perfect.) Continuing to draw will only improve your skill. I think if you practiced a lot you could be pretty awesome at drawing! Keep up the good work.
Hello there. I am Ehte here for the review. You have done a good work there. If you call these doodles then whatever artwork i have done in my whole life time is a doodle. Even worse than that. XD As Jennya said you should now keep the lined sheets aside and start working on clear white ones. The sketch with the dragon in it could use some more sketching and details. And one with the rose is good but the head part looks a bit odd. If you keep working then you will totally excel in it. I totally suck at sketching that is why a cannot give a detailed review for these sketches. You have talent my friend. Keep up the good work.
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Thanks guys! You're right, her forehead looks way too small O.o The tilt of the paper might have something to do with it, but even so, it should be at least three centimeters above where it is. And I'll certainly put more detail on the dragons, maybe with colour this time! =D Exciting! (not sarcastic)Thanks again!
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I agree! You are too talented... see if you can get some plain white paper for your drawing notebook! It'll be much better, honest.
I love the dragons! They are strange and furry and I love it that they're fighting with each other.
I think the girl's nose needs to be a bit more prominent! Everything else seems outlined, but her nose is almost not there. It's a bit weird! Also, the forehead looks small... but I think you knew this!
Nice job!
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