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I did this like 3-5 years ago, to let you know why it looks a little worn.


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Beautiful. I only wish I could have that kind of artistic talent. I think the next step with this would be to do some shading. And I don't think it looks worn at all. But then again, it is kind of hard to tell when it was scanned.

She looks to me kind of like a fairy. And those eyes remind me of a cartoon character, like annemae or something. Good luck with your drawing. You sure have talent for it.
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I really liked this. I really enjoy anime and this was a nice peice to look at.

Now for the crack-down. I do think that the wings should flow a bit better. I know that you're only human but this is a valuable skill to be able to have. Also her waist is abnormally small. I think it would have been a smart idea to proportion her body a bit more realistically.

Fortunately that is all I can find fault with here.




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It looks perfectly preserved. :)

You seem to have amazing talent drawing anime. All your proportions are right, although the picture is a little big. You could add some shading or improve some lines if you wanted to edit it. Her waist is very thin, as said above, and our eyes naturally wan to pull her other, hidden arm into her waist to make up for the space. If I'd have done this, I would've made the rose facing the other way so it would stand out more. Her eyes seem to droop down a little low, the bottom lids. The winds are great, and there's really nothing else to criticize on! :)
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Tte eyes are rather large, the nose seems very strange, but the hands were perfect! That's pretty much the sum of my review.
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However, about those wings...real bird's wings have large feathers at the tips, then medium sized feathers at the lower end and middle of the wing. Lastly, tiny feathers cover the front of the wing (where air resistance is strong) and lap over each other very smoothly. Here, you seem to have put large and small feathers rather randomly together.
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Shiney, that's amazing! I'm amazed! Who taught you how to draw? How did you learn? Since when? O.O I wish I was half as good. :o I'm happy with knowing how to draw hearts :lol: but I'm aiming, and wishing, and dreaming to be as good as you someday.<3333333333333

I love it! Keep drawing.

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I love this! I suck at wings , ruffles and folds(The dress). I also LOVE the hands I work for ever on hands to make them look half as good as yours. It would take me months to make them look like that!
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Most of what I saw in your picture (and then some) has already been pointed out, but I noticed one thing that just nagged at me...but if I'm the only one, just ignore :D .

The eyes...I honestly don't mind their hugeness, nor the disproportionate waist. I like it. It gives it almost an unreal look, like a fairy or a sprite or something. Very pretty. However, the lower lashes at the corners of the eyes kind of took away from the immortal look of her, because they look like WRINKLES. I'm sorry if you find that offensive. I would be offended, too, if someone told me I had accidentally drawn wrinkles on an angel. I had to point it out though. Something about the combination of those lovely big eyes, the bottom outer corner lashes, and the adorable loose curly strands of hair straggling down her hair give her and uncharacteristically aged look. Not a good look for an angel.

Other than that, though, I LOVED THIS PIECE. I highly respect your raw talent. Absolutely gorgeous. :D
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hey, this picture is really beautiful. I love the expression in her eyes, and her hair is perfect. Keep drawing your super talented. :)




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This is very good.... actually this is more than good....maybe its even more than good! someday somewhere you drew this. and that place could have inspired you in anyway. I have noooo absulute tips for you in the recent drwing you have done. its perfect to put in color. maybe you should color it. I think your very talented, keep up the great work senorita!

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I love this picture. And I love the use of the crosses!




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My only problem with it is that I want to see it colored so it brings it out even more. XD No, but seriously, this is awesome. And the fact that you did this a couple of years ago, and your artistic talent has probably only increased? Oh. My. Goodness. Post more stuff! :D
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OK This is a shocking picture. I love it. The picture draws out attention and the clothes fit the face perfectly. I would improve on the eyes. The seem a little to large for her face.
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The first thing I said when I saw this: Oooh, pretty!
You are such an AMAZING artist! (she says without looking at your other work... :P) I love the wings, so well done! Wings are so difficult (at least for me...), and you did a fantastic job! Very nice details :)
The hair is beautiful, it really has a lot of dimension! The curls and little flips add a nice touch :) One part looks a little odd, where her hair curls down to her nose; the curl almost looks like her actual nose, and is a bit off-putting.
I love the cross theme you have: her necklace, arm, and wrist. Very nice :)
Her skirt is so cool! Extremely detailed! Looks like it took a while... :P Unless it's only me that takes a long time to draw details :O
You are so great at making roses as well! It really adds to the drawing :)
Anyway... overall I really love this! I want to check out your other works as well :)

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That's actually pretty awesome!
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Angels are beautiful! This would be so epic if it was in color. I see nothing wrong with it at all! And you drew this years ago? Gosh! You have real talent:) keep drawing stuff.
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