Note: This is not in need of reviews as it is not a literary work. This is a game-type activity.
Here's a poetry exercise to sharpen our description with as few words as possible. Could that mean Haiku?
That's right, folks. We here at the poetry forum are gonna duke it out--not with swords or guns, but with words.
Seventeen syllables worth, to be precise. If you're not aware of what a Haiku is, here's a quick note:
Haiku is a form of poetry consisting of three lines, respectively measuring 5/7/5 in beats. A Haiku is typically about nature, and more often than not denotes a particular season in which the poem takes place (though it doesn't have to, by any means). They're beautiful things, and, while small, can take masterful lyricists to craft.
Senryu are similar, although they deal with more human ideas/emotions/situations. They're my personal favorite. Same format.
So this is our battle, poets! The task is simple: merely post a Haiku or Senryu.
The major hitch of the exercise is that the first line of your poem must feed off of the last line of the one above yours. The entire poem may be different, but they'll all be connected. One huge Poem Chain. To begin:
Downpours in the south
make rivers strong as wildfire;
April boasts its strength.
