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eldEr · 2011-02-01T15:56:03Z

Welcome to Isha's Cooking Store! Mostly, we sell pots and pans, but Aisle 3 is full of shiny, freshly shipped review packages, all stacked neatly in large bins for your convenience! Notice! Clearance! All reviews are now and forever will be 99.9% off! The pots and pans are all ready sold out, but I'm sure that if you ask really nicely I could find you a picture of one or something! The review packages are as followed: -Any poetry or lyrics you need reviewed. I'll do up to three at a time, but please don't request any more than that at once. :shock: -I will review short stories, and parts of short stories. (If you want me to review part two or three, but you don't need reviews on the first parts, could you link me to the whole thing anyways so that I can read it and get a feel of what's going on? Thanks. 8)) -I will review novels, but I prefer to start from chapters 1-5. If your novel is further along than that, I probably won't have the time to review it. If you want me to review everything you have up (Until chapter 5, of course), please let me know. If you only want a specific chapter reviewed, I can do that, too. ;) ---- (Note that some exceptions may be made to this if I love you enough. Or, you know, if you suck up lots or something. Hopefully the 'nobody reads the fine print!' thing still applies. Nah, just kidding. ;D -Request up to 3 things at one time. (Exception: Novel chapters. These will take me a while to get through, though.) It might take me a bit longer to get to everything, but they will get done. (For example: You might request Chapter 1 of your novel, and both parts of your two-part short story. If you're requesting a [so far] 5-chapter-long novel, you might not want to ask me to do anything else. :smt002 ) And remember, everything is on clearance for 99.9% off! (Meaning I require a "please". That's all, though. :smt004 )

ehte92

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Thu Apr 14, 2011 2:12 pm

ehte92 says... · Thu Apr 14, 2011 2:12 pm

Hello there, Isha. :pirate3:

Could you please review these poems for me?

topic79077.html
topic78214.html
topic79212.html

Take your time. :smt003

Thank you.

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Skorpionne

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Thu Apr 14, 2011 11:00 pm

Skorpionne says... · Thu Apr 14, 2011 11:00 pm

I have something I need reviewing, but it's not on YWS. Mind if I PM it to you?

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eldEr

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Thu Apr 14, 2011 11:15 pm

eldEr says... · Thu Apr 14, 2011 11:15 pm

Umm... I don't mind, but I'm not promising I'll get to it straight, straight away. xD I have a few things I need to do, so the next two or three days are going to be hectic - starting tonight. (PM it to me or post it on YWS, either one works. I prefer the latter, but meh.)

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eldEr

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Fri Apr 15, 2011 9:46 pm

eldEr says... · Fri Apr 15, 2011 9:46 pm

All of those are done except for the last one - which I'm still waiting for.

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MiaParamore

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Sun Apr 17, 2011 2:52 pm

MiaParamore says... · Sun Apr 17, 2011 2:52 pm

Long time, no review, heh? Bad! LOL. But could you review a new project for me?

Here you go--Call Me Mr. Ailuro

`Shrubs

Thanks in advance.

"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore

eldEr

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Mon Apr 18, 2011 11:05 pm

eldEr says... · Mon Apr 18, 2011 11:05 pm

Done. ^^

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niteowl

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Mon Apr 18, 2011 11:43 pm

niteowl says... · Mon Apr 18, 2011 11:43 pm

Could you review this poem for me please?

"You do ill if you praise, but worse if you censure, what you do not understand." Leonardo Da Vinci

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eldEr

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Tue Apr 19, 2011 1:57 am

eldEr says... · Tue Apr 19, 2011 1:57 am

Finished!

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cupcake

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Fri Apr 22, 2011 5:48 am

cupcake says... · Fri Apr 22, 2011 5:48 am

If you have time, could you please review my poem. Here's the link:
viewtopic.php?t=79554

God gives us our relatives - thank God we can choose our friends.
- Ethel Watts Mumford
A real friend is one who walks in when the rest of the world walks out.
- Walter Winchell
“I’ll Surprise you, I promise”
-Adam Lambert

Elinor

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Fri Apr 22, 2011 4:02 pm

Elinor says... · Fri Apr 22, 2011 4:02 pm

Can you look at this short story for me? Thanks so much!

All our dreams can come true — if we have the courage to pursue them.
-- Walt Disney

eldEr

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Mon Apr 25, 2011 1:41 am

eldEr says... · Mon Apr 25, 2011 1:41 am

Both are done. ^^

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pinkangel54123

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Mon Apr 25, 2011 4:31 pm

pinkangel54123 says... · Mon Apr 25, 2011 4:31 pm

Could you review the first chapter of my Fantasy novel? It's called The Concord, and I really need some help with it. Thanks in advanced!

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