I think my brain just died...

I think my brain just died,
Though I thought it would go with a pop.
Or maybe a huge explosion
That would rock the entire Earth!
Earthquakes would start
Followed by floods.
And then the crust itself
Would collaspe
Until everyone cried:
"Why did her brain
Have to die?"

But instead it stopped
With just a fizzle
And a nod of the head.

I'm not any good at critiquing(sp?) poems but this just made me laugh.

I think I'll have to second that. I can't give any suggestions or really pieces of critizism, so I'll just say that it was very funny.

I think it was really good, in an exquisite sort of way. Nice stuff.

are you kidding me? i think my brain just died.
nonetheless, it's cool, if not just decidely true.

Hehe!

This only means one thing... I might become a poet yet!

Snoink your such a cutie! Im sure if my brain died i wouldnt even notice so don't worry