*Fan squel!* This is really good/cool. Graphic novels are very hard to rview but I deciced you deserved a coment. I think the pictures are a tiny bit big and it'd be nice if you could make them a bit smaller. Other than that I see no flaws! Good work and please do more!
I have loved the words and I have hated them. I only hope I have made them right.
Wow! I love this. The sketches are so good. They are great. And the emotion put into the writing really draws me in. I hardly ever read graphic novels but, this seems interesting to me. I will for sure read more. Great job.
Got YWS? "No one can arrive from being talented alone,work transform talent into genius" - Anna Pavlova
I think that you did this really well! The emotion that you put in; it made me really feel sorry for him/her? I loved the drawings as well you managed to capture at emotion as well, and i was really surprised and happy to see that you captured the emotion in the eyes as well.
Lone is a he and thank you very much! I love drawing eyes. I think you can show so much feeling with a simple eye drawing. I will have more posted tonight. Thank you everyone for all the feedback!
Here's the title page of chapter one and the first page: (I can't make them any smaller, sorry, oh and the speech bubble in the first panel got messed up, sorry)
*Claps excitedly* Oh my gosh! I am officially a fan of your graphic novel! How did you manage to get to draw the wolves like that? I love the toning, I love Lone and I'm waiting for more! I know it takes time for you to do these but....when's the rest coming??
Please, keep 'em coming!!
when she needs to shelter from reality she takes a dip in my daydreams
Thank you, everyone! I hope to have a new page up by tomorrow. I will also be introducing a new character. (And a very hard one to draw, mind you) Her name is Luminous (Lumi for short) and she's awesome. So much fun to write for.
Then again, I do love Lone's sarcasm.... Sarcasm rules.
So, yeah, I'll have at least one more page up, I might have two depending on how long the first one takes me to draw. I'm mentally working out the layout right now and the dialog. So hang in there, more coming!
(I couldn't upload anything today because I ran out of black pens.)
Where are the pictures? The classic case of the pictures won't show up is happening right here. But if you can fix it, PM me and I'll be happy to do a review for you!
"Is this the real life, or is this just fantasy? Caught in a landslide, no escape from reality."
very good - i wish I coul draw like that More please *does confined finger dancing to congratulate you* well have to go, my monkey needs me Keep it up - Tinkem
"The rabbit always squeals in the jaws of the fox, but when has another rabbit ever rushed up to save it?" Damon Salvatore ;'( please, my lump, he just needs HUGS <3 Need a review? Just ask Just keep writing, just keep writing, do-do-do-do-do
This is actually quite amazing, Goa. Someone told me that someone was writing a Graphic Novel with a character named Lumi, so I found this. Hah. I'm not particularly good with art, and your dialog is alright, so this is just a *like* review. I would like to ask that you use consistent punctuation in your written portions, though. Other than that, it's looking good.
-Lumi
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon
I am the property of Rydia, please return me to her ship.
