The Silent Song (My graphic novel) <<Updated>>

This is quite amazing now that I can see the pictures. Graphic novels look extremely hard to make, and you did an outstanding job here. The wolves look so real, but I do have a question. In the first one, what is exactly happening? I see wolves on one wolf, but I'm not sure what they're doing. Could you explain that? The chapter one is very good, and I really liked the cliff-hanger. I would really like to see more comics. Keep up the good work.

Tyler.

Hey, what medium are you using? I would guess brush and ink, since that's a lot of black to dow ith pen...or is it marker? Anyways, I like these a lot for your portrayal of dynamic action, but the speech bubbles are lacking a little. Lumi seems a just little weird, what with the anime-style tuft of hair. Also, I think that last line by Lumi should have read "You wouldn't have to eat me to achieve that, Wolf." since it seems a little more effective.
Great work! *likes*

No, I like the line I used. "You wouldn't have to eat me, wolf" meaning she could tear him to shreds anyway. It makes more sense for her character and the scene (and the one after it.) I can't do anything about the speech bubbles... I know they're boring but I don't have an art tablet and that's the best I can do. Lumi's got that tuft of hair because all my female animals end up with hair, I don't know why. XD

I also used a black sharpie and a black Prismacolour Premier marker (and a little editing on Art) to make the pages.

Hey, this is really good. Some of the dialogue isn't as good as the rest. I really really really like it though. The art is quite good and the idea is incredible. I'm so sososo excited to see some more. Get busy

Oh my God! That was simply brilliant! You have a gift I would love to see moe please continue to add to this!

Nice. My internet is capped so only some of your pictures. it is actually showing up. In general, it's quite good. The dialog isn't bad and so is the art. But i do have issues.
1. You used the pen to liberally. Not everything has to be scribbled in. Makes it look messy. Use every line carefully don't scribble. I suggest you practice of look up crosshatching.

2. Make the separating lines neater. Use an ruler.

3. The background does not need to be all black. although generally you have done well sometimes they detract form the actual focus of the picture.

Good work!