Assassins Creed Brotherhood- The Courtesan

Ha ha. I know i haven't posted anything on here lately but i've not really had any time for drawing lately. School work and stuff. So... i did this today, it looks ok, but i admit a little deformed. Ung... it was just hard. anyway, reviews would be appreciated!!!



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I love the ode to A.C. I don't play (too nerve racking) but for some reason I love watching my guy friends play it, I like the story. Anyway the body is a bit unportioned; either the body is too long or the arms are to short. But I can still see the her in the face area. I love the hint of texture in the shirt though. But with such a detailed character you could have a lot of fun adding more to her and going into more detail with things like her hair and fan (that's what most caught my eye). But in the end of course you did VERY well!

yeah, i know her body is long but argh i just didn't want to change it after adding all that detail. thank you for the review! and yeah, i kind of gave up on the detail... there's just too much of it in assassins creed clothing. D=

*Sees Assassins Creed* Yes! Finally some art I can relate to!
*Sees Brotherhood* Damn, don't have that one yet.
*Sees Courtesan* This is going to be harder.

I guess Im going to have to look up a picture for this.

Of course It wont come up.

Well lets see.

Her neck is a little weird. The bones look more like they are outside of the skin rather than inside, her body is oddly shaped, and her breasts are kind off...weird.

Ah yes. i know that my friend. I struggled with this one. i basically gave up in the end. and from where i was drawing it at first, it looked fine, but when i stood up... NO. maybe i could squish it or something...
thank you anyway dudes!

Hi there.
First of all: AMAZING game.
Second of all: the review.

So, I'm going to try to take a look at the things you CAN change without having to completely start over and rip holes through your paper with an eraser. I know how frustrating it is to finished something detailed and realize the proportions are off. :/
The chin is extremely pointy- you could fix this pretty easily, even without an eraser. You could round it out and add in some shading underneath her neck.
This next part, I'm reluctant to say. You did both hands extraordinarily well, but they're a bit too small. >.<
That I think you would have to erase and start over, but they don't have THAT much detail on them.
Also, her nose looks a little crooked and is really close to her lips. If you want her to be facing downward, which it kind of looks like by your shading, I would work on the shadows more and maybe the perspective.
Last thing: you could clean up your lines and make them darker-- these are kind of lightly done, and it looks much neater when the lines that count are clear.

Overall, good job. I know that it was really hard, and you did an amazing job with the detail. It's a shame about the proportions, but disregarding them, this is really, really good. Nice job.
-Coral-

I love Assassin's Creed, so generally, the title pulled me in. And wow, this is a great drawing. Although I could say you could have added some more detail on the face. But you got the clothing almost spot on, and this is an amazing drawing job. The shape of the body is extremely exact, and it's just amazing. But what I think is missing is the gauntlet. Other than that it's a truly amazing drawing.

Tyler.