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The first one is such a cutie avvie! It really should be your avvie you know. Haha... by the way, I don't know why, but I noticed the way you outlined the arms in the black jacket by leaving out white spaces which you colored in with blue. It's such a weird thought. Haha... I miss drawing by the way. But that's irrelevant. Anyway, yes, yes, I did like these. Thanks for sharing. :D
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Nice! :D I love them!

Anyway, I prefer the 'good' one, but his body seems too tall for someone who's actually sitting. The 'evil' one doesn't have a problem of such sort. But it lacks details in comparison to the 'good' one. I like the 'cup' and the 'scarf' in the 'good' avatar. His hair's nicely done too! :D The 'evil' one seems really sinister o.o which makes it undesirable...BUT that's not a problem 'cause you meant him to be evil lol.

(Uh...I think that's as constructive as I can right now in reviewing this work. xD My review was supposed to be short. lol)
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I love the colors of the first one and also of the last one. I like the scarf on the first one. I wish I could draw like that, I mean I can if I put my mind to it but other than that I can't. Hahahaha, don't laugh. But, I think they can be improved a little with the.... ummm... lining, I guess. Or they are just perfect the way they are.




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You are such a good drawer! They are so cool so well done, I couldn't draw to save my life so you should feel lucky that you were blessed with such awesomeness drawing skills.
I like them both but I think Kid Evil is my favourite.
Well done and I hope to see more of your drawings soon. :wink:
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Ok, here are my comments for the "Bluey" picture. First, I really liked how you had the scarf wrapped around half of his face! I also liked how you didn't add the nose. Something about that tiny deatil just gives it a certain feel! The one thing that needs work is his lower body. His left thigh is a little bit too skinny. Also, since you didn't add much color contrast, it looks like he has a paper thin butt. But I loved everything else!

As for the second picture, I thought it was very nice. Simple, but nice. My only critiq is the hair. I know you were trying to making it seem as if her hair was greasy and it has a glare on it, but you cant just leave it purely white. You need to add a little bit of gray or something around the edges because right now it lookes like she has a bald spot on her head. But other than that it was a very nice picture!
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