Young Writers Society

I tried draw out my own avatar.... So i ended up with two of them one is the good ehte and one is the evil one...

1.Bluey
I love Blue and Black so here is the result





2.Kid Evil
And this is the evil me




Hope you friends like my avatars...

Go Bluey!
I like em both, their both good. It would be better if you had something in the backround then it would be more "avatary"

These avatars are so cute! I truly love them!

Nike

Hi there!

SO, I like your style. These are pretty good drawings. Onto a couple of nitpicks now.

#1. I really like this. Better than the other one. My personal opinion is that the hair will look neater if you had a slight black outline on the face-side of it. Also; I think you need some work with his bottom. It seems like he has a weirdly shaped rear.
#2. I like this too. But I don;t like the eyes on two different levels, even if it was intentional. I like your use of strokes, but it comes out of the outline in some parts and that was probably a little too hasty shading on your part.

Anyway, good work
Keep drawing.

Thanks for all the comments friends.....
I really appreciate it....
And i will try improving myself...
Keep reviewing...

I don't get it? O_o? So you just wanted to draw out your avatar? Well, that is... nice? Hmm, kinda hard to do some reviews, when it has a weird purpose, but nevertheless:

1: This one looks cool. The blue eyebrows throw me off. And the blue outline is akward.

2: I like this one. My only problem is that there is not enough shading in the middle, by the hip area.

I really like these, wish I could draw my own Avatar... You are really talented.
Im just having the problem of changing the size when I get onto the laptop and actually getting an idea of what to draw, haha.
I love the evil kid, gives me a chill and the blue one is so cute
Well done!

Whoa, they're both awesome. I looooved them both. I so wish I could draw like you. I was born with an art deficiancy.

Small changes to be made in either one. #1 is a bit too long in certain spots. Kneck is elongated by the scarf, looks a bit off. then the torso is also way too long.

#2 eyes are lopsided and looks like he should be very uniform but ends up not being with the unbalance

daawwwhhh! The first one is so cuuute :] He looks like the kind of character that everyone wants to hug, and he doesn't know why. The second one is okay - it looks like you didn't take very much time on it. But it's still better than some of the stuff I draw, so I'm in no position to say anything, ahha. Nice work!

Awwww! These are so cool! Bluey is probably my top favorite, though. Just because he looks a bit neater AND his expression and whole lay out is adorable. He seems a bit long, though. Could have been the way my computer uploaded the image, or maybe even intentional?
Anyway, I love them. Awesome job.

Hi, ehte92!
Once again, I'm impressed. Bluey is very cute, and I like the way you use only two colors, as well as the way you outlined the piece-I could easily see it as a sticker somewhere. As for your second avatar, he's very evil-in a good way! His suit is very spiffy, and I also like the way you drew his hair. It really looks like it's in motion. Keep up the good work!

Hey,
I also drew my own avatar!

I loved the first pic, it was cute and adorable. though i would try using more colors maybe different types of blue.

The second one is pretty cool as well but it seemed to lack detail in the face and the body. Try studying people or professionally drawn cartoons to see how they draw bodies. You should also try different mediums or maybe better markers because i believe you could get a nicer finish. Great work.

Wow, I really liked both of these. But I'd have to say I like the first one better though, and here's why...

Blue and black man- I love how almost everything about him is blue, from his hair to the stripes on his scarf. His eyes look so serious and you can't see his mouth and it gives him that kind of mysterious aura and I love it. Even his drink is blue, what is it? I really loved this.

Mr. Evil- I really didn't like this one as much. I like how he had the shine on his hair, but not much else. I think that he is too skinny, and that he should have his hands out of his pockets. And it appears as if you didn't spend enough time coloring in his midsection.

These are both great drawings and you are a great drawer, but if I were you I would say the first should be your avatar.

Tyler.