Boy 1

This is overall, pretty good, but I do spot some major flaws.

~First off, the head is pretty...unpreportional if you might say. The head is a litle to wide for the width of the hair and there is no real defined curve to it. Common flaws, but they still hurt.

~The folds on the clothing are a little akward. It makes the arms look like they are morphing with the torso.

I LOVE his expression!! I would totally write a story/ watch an anime about this dude! Eh, sorry this review wasn't so helpful. I think most of the other people covered everything. Heh, Eheh. *cough* Well...
Anyways, love his expression! He looks either bored or... I dunno. I also like his hair.

Absolutely love it would like to say wish it had more detail but other than that its amazing ^^ Keep up the good work and Happy Drawing
Soulkana<3

I don't see anything wrong with this. I really really like the eyes and the expression in general is good. If anything I'd say it was a little tooooo simple. But simplicity is always good. =] Great work.

I'll admit I'm not one for drawing or art (but I am a master of the stick figure technique) but I figured I'd give it a try at a review. I like this. There's a lack of extraneous detail to clutter the piece, instead enhancing the hair and eyes and main features and I really liked that. I do have to agree that the shoulder width was a bit off in comparison to the head and neck. Then again, it's not that bad if the character is more athletic but the poise the picture shows seems a more peaceful sort.

The line filing and shade is pretty much perfect.
Well done.