Boy 1

So this is my first art upload! Not my best, but I'm having a little trouble converting some of my pics so this is all I've got for now.
Thanks everyone for stopping by. Reviews are welcome!!!! I'd like to improve as much as I can

Wow, this is amazing!

If he was in an action-y pose, I could see him in anime/manga

Also, just one little thing. Er, maybe two.

The proportion seems a bit off, then again, I am a horrible artist. But the head just seems a little small for his large frame. I adore his facial features *melts*

And the hair. If I were you, instead of just having that one piece off in the back maybe add in a few more? A lot of anime/manga characters have hair that has quite a few pieces in the back, sticking up everywhere.

Hope this helped.

<3 Meg

aww thanks! My drawings usually have an anime/manga look to them, maybe that's why the porportions seem a bit unrealistic (I'll have to work on that! xD) And I was wondering about the hair myself... I just couldn't put my finger on what was wrong about it!

WOW. Really nice.
Great inking.
But it seems a little out of proportion when it gets below the neckline.
The shoulders and mid-body are a little too wide for his head/neck area.
Other than that, great job!
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-jojo.

Thanks for the advice ^_^ I'll defninately keep that in mind. I should've put more thought into his clothes, I mainly just focused on his face.

This is very good! As other people have said, it's kind of disproportionate under then neckline. I think it's very nice overall. It could be improved if you added some detail. Manga/anime characters are often characterized by their clothing. Therefore, your character sort of gives off a "large sweater" vibe. The eyes are very nice, though, and it's overall very well-done.

-Tori

Actually, I kind of wanted him to have messy hair and a baggy sweater. Detail would definately help though, thanks for pointing it out

Wow this is a really talented piece of artwork.
I love art and I can really see the emotion behind the eyes of the person.
However i think the body could be drawn with a little more depth, if you get what I mean, like use his body to provok emotion aswell as his face.
But yeah this is really stunning keep up the fabulous work x

WOW...
Its a great piece and great work with the bold lines.... Its looks as if the boy has load on his shoulders...
A very neat art...
Keep up the good work...
PM me for anything...

Thanks, guys I've been working a ton on getting clothes/body proportions right after getting these comments. It's definitely a weak area for me. Thanks so much for reviewing, it really helps

I love the way you inked this! It has a sort of caligraphic feel to it that is very expressive. And all of the little details are excellent as well. As for his expression, it makes me want to hug him to bits. Good job!

OK! So, well done! I love manga art! I especially love this one. the hair looks perfect, as does his nose and mouth.
However, the shoulders are a little too low and wide, it looks out of proportion compared to the rest of the drawing. Try shortening the top and give more room for the actual shoulders, make them smaller. (hope that made sense?)
Also, the eyes and eyebrows are a little off. You should focus more on the angle of the eyes. The right eye is slightly bigger than the left, it stands out a lot because of the black ink. It makes it easier to spot.
Also, if you look at the eyebrows you'll noticed one is pointed in a different direction compared to the other, and it looks distorted and unusual...

I hope i was helpful, and that i made sense? Ugh...

Anyway, i love this! It could have a little colour and shading maybe?

Overall, well done!
MysticalBlood

Iz wush hish fashe Grandma translation: I love his face

I would tell you that the shoulders are a little wide and that the body is a little big for his head (or maybe his head is too small for his big body? The world may never know) but you've already heard that a million times by now, so that would be mighty annoying I assume. Even though I just said it. Hmm.

I love the anime/manga look to it. Keep it up!

Aww he looks so sad. I don't knwo anime or manga so I do not know this character but the eyes portray a GREAT emotion.

I like it. Is he like a character? Or just a made up drawing. I change the like it to love it.