Legen and Tomoyo

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Last edited by Sassafras on Tue Oct 01, 2013 7:11 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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ReisePiecey wrote:Okay, some pictures of two of my actual girls. Tomoyo and Legen. You will see two sides of Tomoyo, her light and dark side. There is a point to that but I can't reveal it just yet. If you really like to know I can PM the answer to you. Now, without further ado.

I thought they were drawings for a second and was ready to give you high praise for them lol. But these are good pictures. Not much to say....
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Wow, these are really great. I love how you put the dolls in life-like positions. I think my fave will have to be the second one of Tomoyo's dark side.
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those dolls are really, really, really creepy...and 3D like.
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I love the idea that these are dolls, I don't think I've seen it before :) And I love that you arranged them in some interesting matter with backgrounds and all, it's good.

Pretty good pictures!

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Hmm, in one picture of Tomoyo, you can see the elbow joint, and in the picture of Legen where her shoulder is exposed, you can see the line of another joint. Of course, the one of Tomoyo's light side has major joint exposure, but you couldn't get that skimpy strap-thingy on her without that, so it's sorta understood.
Despite those few errors, you did very well in setting it up. I liked your boy dolls a lot more, but that's probably just because I'm a guy.
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Cute, where are the dolls from? I love the pictures!!!
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Wow, I really like these. They're so different and unique. You have a great talent!

Ok, so, I think I'll just rate these, one at a time, from 1-5, and then explain my rating, sound good?

Pic. 1~ I'd say a three. She's dark and mysterious, and I love the way her hands are placed (I'm not sure why), but I think she's turned a little to far from the camera. I know what you were thinking, and the pose is cool, but if I had to chose between the two 'dark Tomoyos' I wouldn't chose this one.

Pic. 2~ This is my favorite one and I'm going to say a five. Again you have the dark and mysterious, but this time you can see her face. I love the fact that part of it is still missing; she's still hiding in the folds of her hood and the curtain of her bangs; love it! Also, the makeup is absolutely wonderful and perfectly placed. I wasn't to fond of the bat, especially in the first one, but I think that seeing it's face makes it better somehow.

Pic. 3~ Out of the three different dolls, Light Tomoyo is my least favorite; but this is my favorite out of the her two pictures, so I'll give it a two....and a half. She seems too pale, and her makeup is too pink. Her outfit arrangement is quite beautiful, I mean, it coordinates well and all, but to me it just isn't all that pretty.

Pic. 4~ Two, I guess. I know you meant well in the position, and it looks the most real and casual, but her joints are just to noticeable. And I think her shirt is a little too low...

Pic. 5~ Leagan is my favorite, she's so pretty! I'm going to give her a five. So, her looks definitely have me hooked, lets talk about her position. I think this is my favorite pose out of all of her's. I like the angle, and the way the background gets fuzzy (yes, I said I like that fact) But the minus is her hand, I'm not quite sure what it's doing. It kinda looks misplaced.

Pic. 6~ I really like this one too. So, four. In the first one, you couldn't see as much of her clothes. But now that I can see them, I have to say that I kinda disagree with the dress, it's just -in my opinion- to black. Don't get me wrong, I love black, but it's just black with black sowing and designs. Reminds me of a witch...

Pic. 7~ Three. There's not much to say with this picture, since I've already given my opinion on her looks. But this would have to be one of my least favorites. Her wrist is blurry, she's looking straight at the camera (I always try to avoid eye contact with the camera unless you have the perfect look), and there's a blank wall behind her.

I hope this helped. and I hope I didn't discourage you with my harsh ratings, I really do love them all.
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