I like it, It has a certain sarcasticness to it that most poems don't have. Let me guess, It took you ten minutes to write that? Try making it clearer what your trying to get across though, I had to read it twice to get it.
Hmmm... it looks like Kyla deleted the poem, so I'll lock this!
Kyla, if you want me to unlock this, just shoot me a message.
Ubi caritas est vera, Deus ibi est.
"The mark of your ignorance is the depth of your belief in injustice and tragedy. What the caterpillar calls the end of the world, the Master calls the butterfly." ~ Richard Bach
Some people are hourglass shaped, some people are apple shaped, some people are pear shaped, some people are even bean pole shaped, but if we’re not careful we all become banana shaped. This is your gentle posture reminder. — Ranger
