True Love

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Saw this back in October and I had this feeling bothering me. Now that I'm seeing this again I'd like to share the following:

"True"
True
by ☆Chilosa☆
I do believe the lord above created you for me to love
He picked you out from all the rest because he knew i'd like you the best
I had a heart and it was true
But now it's gone from me to you
Take care of it as i had done
Fore you have 2 and I have none
If i should die before I wake
I'll wait for you at tne golden gates
If you're not there by judgement day
I'll know you went the other way
I'll give the angel's back their wings
And gold harps with pearl strings
And just to prove my love is true i'd go to hell to be with you☆


Another poem
Very similar, but notice the "2003" for the year there.
Thursday, September 25, 2003

my poem of love
i do believe the LORD above created you for me to be in love
he pick you out from all the rest because he knoew i love you best
i have a heart and that is true
can prove to you, my LOVE is true
so hear this heart that beats for you
it can't deny that i LOVE you
if i'll go far and then we part, you'll still be in my grieving heart
if someone will be there with you forget me not, i still LOVE you
if i would die and lose my love
i'll wait for you in heaven's light and there will have our endless with the loving GOD, the LORD above


Yahoo Answers Poem
Again, the same consistencies...
My poem!what do you think about it? I have this on you tube already.?
Angels Wing

I do believe the Lord above
Created you for me to love
He picks you out from all the rest
Because He knew I love you best.

I have a heart and it is true
Now it is gone from me to you
So care for it like what I do
For I don't have and you have two.

If in heaven and you are not there
I'll wait for you in the golden stairs
If you are not there on judgement day
I know you will come some other day.

So I'll return my angels wing
My golden lamp and everything
To prove to you my love is true
I ask the Lord I'll wait for you.


So either you're all of these people...or you're being copied. One by someone in the past, another by two different women, and then countless other versions of this. I don't think that any of those options are the case though.

I haven't found the exact original, but I'd say you are being very disingenuous to the origin of this work and not making it clear if you were inspired to make your own version. Nonetheless, I am not impressed that you're otherwise using a template and tweaking it and calling it your own and then prancing about on here like you're proven.

Get back on this forum and prove yourself to these very interesting finds, or continue using other people's work as your own. Regardless, your credibility is shot to hell. I guess that will keep you company waiting for your true love.




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Try "Dearest Darling." Written in 1958.

Plagiarized. Locked.
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