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seeminglymeaningless
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Mon Sep 20, 2010 11:57 am
seeminglymeaningless says... · Mon Sep 20, 2010 11:57 am
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Thanks for the review yourself, Pink :P

The Devil's Pocket Watch by PinkShearwater
Under review.
Prologue
1/4 Musketeers have reviewed so far.
Chapter One
1/4 Musketeers have reviewed so far.

I really liked your story so far, Pink :)
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Wed Sep 22, 2010 1:17 pm
iceprincess says... · Wed Sep 22, 2010 1:17 pm
Thank you all for reviewing! :D
I'll definitely ask you guys to review my stuff more often. :wink:
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and you're all alone again tonight; not again, not again, not again.
and don't it feel alright, and don't it feel so nice? lovely.





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chetanbhasin
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Wed Sep 22, 2010 3:31 pm
chetanbhasin says... · Wed Sep 22, 2010 3:31 pm
Hey! Pleas review my novel, "How Difficult Life could be". The link is given in my signature.
It is an adventure novel, and I've posted three chapters till yet. Pleas have a look.
Thanks
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Thu Sep 23, 2010 3:20 pm
ultraviolet says... · Thu Sep 23, 2010 3:20 pm
Can you review this for me? Thanks in advance! I've Already Tried ~contest entry~
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Rydia
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Thu Sep 23, 2010 4:45 pm
Rydia says... · Thu Sep 23, 2010 4:45 pm
This is a really cute system you have here! Love it :)

Annnnd I'd love a review on The Pain of Glass.

It's 3300 words, 16+ rated for language, so I understand if only one or two of you are willing, or even none at all. Genre is action/ adventure. Mnay thanks,

Heather xxx
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seeminglymeaningless
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Fri Sep 24, 2010 12:14 am
seeminglymeaningless says... · Fri Sep 24, 2010 12:14 am
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Sorry guys, for leaving this so late. Will try to catch up as soon as I've completed my Algebra/Calculus assignment TT_TT

How difficult life could be by chetanbhasin
AWAITING THE AUTHOR TO TAKE THE SUGGESTIONS OF PREVIOUS REVIEWS
It is pointless asking the four of us to review a novel that hasn't been edited from previous replies, so when Chetan has implemented the suggestions made from his previous reviewers, he will resubmit his request, and we'll get right on it.
Under review.
Chapter One
1/4 Musketeers have reviewed so far.
Chapter Two
0/4 Musketeers have reviewed so far.
Chapter Three
0/4 Musketeers have reviewed so far.

I've Already Tried by ultraviolet
Under review.
1/4 Musketeers have reviewed so far.

The Pain of Glass by Kitty15
Under review.
1/4 Musketeers have reviewed so far.
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Wed Sep 29, 2010 6:47 am
Sins says... · Wed Sep 29, 2010 6:47 am
Heya ^_^

You asked/suggested for me to request a review here, seeminglymeaningless, so here I am. 8)

novel.php?id=510

Would you review the last two chapters of my novel for me? I've given you the link to the novel as a whole, so you can just click on the last two chapter entries in it.

Thanks a lot!
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seeminglymeaningless
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Wed Sep 29, 2010 7:05 am
seeminglymeaningless says... · Wed Sep 29, 2010 7:05 am
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Oh noes! Now I have to go review it :P Ha ha :P

Am right on it, Skins. I like being prompted to do things, makes me feel like I'm working :D

A Shot of Arrogance by Skins
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Chapter Nine
0/4 Musketeers have reviewed so far.
Chapter Ten
0/4 Musketeers have reviewed so far.
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Wed Sep 29, 2010 11:10 am
Maddy says... · Wed Sep 29, 2010 11:10 am
Hey :)

Wondering if you YWSrs could pretty please review my novel. Only the prologue and chapter 1 has been posted, but more will come.

Here's the link to the prologue: viewtopic.php?t=69989

Willing to donate points for your wonderful service. ;)

Thank you,
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Wed Sep 29, 2010 1:26 pm
seeminglymeaningless says... · Wed Sep 29, 2010 1:26 pm
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A shot of Arrogance by Skins
Under review.
Chapter Nine
1/4 Musketeers have reviewed so far.
Chapter Ten
0/4 Musketeers have reviewed so far.

Flyer's Flight: The Story Of The Opal by Maddy
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Prologue
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Chapter One
1/4 Musketeers have reviewed so far.
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Sat Nov 13, 2010 12:43 pm
seeminglymeaningless says... · Sat Nov 13, 2010 12:43 pm
Come one, come all!

Here to review, staying to review, won't be leaving until I have reviewed so much my fingers blacken and fall off.

So link me to whatever's ailing you, and I'll attack it with all my reviewing remedies until it comes back to life and eats the brains of the living.

Eagerly awaiting some fantastical replies!

- Jai

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Idraax
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Sat Nov 13, 2010 4:51 pm
Idraax says... · Sat Nov 13, 2010 4:51 pm
Um....can you review this for me please? I may expand on some of these....
Check these out please! :)
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Sat Nov 13, 2010 10:43 pm
seeminglymeaningless says... · Sat Nov 13, 2010 10:43 pm
Good morning, Idraax! Today is my boyfriend's birthday, so as soon as we get back from Wet 'n' Wild (water amusement park), I will hop right to reviewing:

More Snippets by idraax
Under review.
1/1 Necromancers + 0/3 Musketeers have reviewed so far.
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Idraax
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Sat Nov 13, 2010 10:48 pm
Idraax says... · Sat Nov 13, 2010 10:48 pm
Ok! That's a good name for a water amusement park. :D
Check these out please! :)
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seeminglymeaningless
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Sun Nov 14, 2010 12:28 pm
seeminglymeaningless says... · Sun Nov 14, 2010 12:28 pm
Hi idraax, done! :D

Anyone else?
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