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seeminglymeaningless · 2010-09-12T11:44:00Z

Leave it to the DYNAMIC DUO The Dynamic Duo: Light_Devil (the Dragon Lady) and me (the Necromancer) would love to review your work :) Basically, if you ask for a review here, you will receive two separate reviews, one from me and one from Azrael (Light_Devil). What we will review: We will review ANYTHING and EVERYTHING ... but poetry (we just don't understand it as a medium and you're better off asking someone else who will know what they are doing :P). We will review anything you link us to, regardless of length, content rating or quality - we are here solely to help. What we ask: + you provide a title to your work + a working link + it is pointless asking the four of us to review a novel/work that hasn't been edited from previous reviews, you're going to get the same comments about the same things. We kindly ask that you make sure you have edited your work from previous suggestions from reviews before asking a review from us + and most importantly, reply to our review if possible in your thread (not only does this show that you will communicate with your reviewers, but it bumps your story back up to the top of the forum) Who are we? The Necromancer: Me = Honest, Very Much So 18 year old university student, studying my first year of a Bachelor of Secondary Education (Majors in Physics and English). I love writing fantasy and science fiction. Rate of Review YWS-aholic. Will review within the day of the request generally, unless you've asked to review a novel, or there are assignments to complete. The Dragon Lady: Light_Devil = Cruel to be Kind 16 year old, A grade student. She writes about anything and everything. Her current aspiration is to become a movie director/producer. Rate of Review Will review things after school hours/after exams. So what are you waiting for? Eagerly awaiting your requests, All for One, and One for All! One Man's Trash, is Another Man's Treasure! The Dynamic Duo! Jai and Azrael -- -- -- -- -- -- -- -- -- Completed/Status Coat of Many Colors by Calligraphy COMPLETE! - - - - - - - - - - The Postman by HomelessPorcupine COMPLETE! - - - - - - - - - - Playthings by iceprincess COMPLETE! - - - - - - - - - - A Shot of Arrogance by Skins COMPLETE! Chapter One Chapter Two Chapter Three Chapter Four Chapter Five Chapter Six Chapter Seven Chapter Eight Chapter Nine - Part One Chapter Nine - Part Two - - - - - - - - - - It's What I Do by ultraviolet COMPLETE! - - - - - - - - - - Beauty's Beast by GirlInTheMirror COMPLETE! - - - - - - - - - - Attack of the Time Flies by Nephthys COMPLETE! - - - - - - - - - - Blue Jay by Apple Item has been deleted - - - - - - - - - - The Devil's Pocket Watch by PinkShearwater COMPLETE! Prologue Chapter One - - - - - - - - - - How difficult life could be by chetanbhasin AWAITING THE AUTHOR TO TAKE THE SUGGESTIONS OF PREVIOUS REVIEWS It is pointless asking the four of us to review a novel that hasn't been edited from previous replies, so when Chetan has implemented the suggestions made from his previous reviewers, he will resubmit his request, and we'll get right on it. Pending Changes/Under review. 1/2 Musketeers have reviewed so far. (Jai has) - - - - - - - - - - I've Already Tried by ultraviolet COMPLETE! - - - - - - - - - - The Pain of Glass by Kitty15 COMPLETE! - - - - - - - - - - A shot of Arrogance by Skins Under review. Chapter Nine 1/2 Musketeers have reviewed so far. Chapter Ten 1/2 Musketeers have reviewed so far. - - - - - - - - - - Flyer's Flight: The Story Of The Opal by Maddy Under review Prologue 1/2 Musketeers have reviewed so far. Chapter One 1/2 Musketeers have reviewed so far. - - - - - - - - - - More Snippets by idraax Under review. 1/1 Necromancers + 0/1 Dragons have reviewed so far. - - - - - - - - - - PS I Hate You (Contest Entry) by Shubhi Under review. 1/1 Necromancers + 0/1 Dragons have reviewed so far. - - - - - - - - - - Chapter Two: Salem by Apple Under review. 1/1 Necromancers + 0/1 Dragon Ladies have reviewed so far. - - - - - - - - - - The Last Day by TIGERSPRITE Under review. 1/1 Necromancers + 0/1 Dragon Ladies have reviewed so far. - - - - - - - - - - Can You See Me? (Chapter One) by Skins Under review. 1/1 Necromancers + 0/1 Dragon Ladies have reviewed so far. - - - - - - - - - - Freya's Replacement by Nephthys Under review. Part One 1/1 Necromancers + 0/1 Dragon Ladies have reviewed so far. Part Two 1/1 Necromancers + 0/1 Dragon Ladies have reviewed so far. Part Three 1/1 Necromancers + 0/1 Dragon Ladies have reviewed so far. Part Four 1/1 Necromancers + 0/1 Dragon Ladies have reviewed so far. Part Five 1/1 Necromancers + 0/1 Dragon Ladies have reviewed so far. - - - - - - - - - - Kiss of Death: Chapter Two by Tigersprite Under review. 1/1 Necromancers + 0/1 Dragon Ladies have reviewed so far. - - - - - - - - - - Can You See Me?: Chapter Two by Skins Under review. 0/1 Necromancers + 0/1 Dragon Ladies have reviewed so far. - - - - - - - - - - The Masquerader Chap. 5 by megsug Under review. 1/1 Necromancers + 0/1 Dragon Ladies have reviewed so far. - - - - - - - - - - Paper Hearts and Bagels by Esther Sylvester Section One Under review. 1/1 Necromancers + 0/1 Dragon Ladies have reviewed so far. Section Two Under review. 1/1 Necromancers + 0/1 Dragon Ladies have reviewed so far. - - - - - - - - - - We are all Birds by onceuponatim3xo Under review. 0/1 Necromancers + 0/1 Dragon Ladies have reviewed so far. - - - - - - - - - - Stop and Stare by Skins Part One Under review. 1/1 Necromancers + 0/1 Dragon Ladies have reviewed so far. Part Two Under review. 1/1 Necromancers + 0/1 Dragon Ladies have reviewed so far. Part Three Under review. 1/1 Necromancers + 0/1 Dragon Ladies have reviewed so far. Part Four Under review. 1/1 Necromancers + 0/1 Dragon Ladies have reviewed so far. Part Five Under review. 1/1 Necromancers + 0/1 Dragon Ladies have reviewed so far. Part Six Under review. 1/1 Necromancers + 0/1 Dragon Ladies have reviewed so far. Part Seven Under review. 1/1 Necromancers + 0/1 Dragon Ladies have reviewed so far. Part Eight Under review. 0/1 Necromancers + 0/1 Dragon Ladies have reviewed so far. - - - - - - - - - - The Masquerader by megsug Prologue Under review. 0/1 Necromancers + 0/1 Dragon Ladies have reviewed so far. Chapter One - Part One Under review. 0/1 Necromancers + 0/1 Dragon Ladies have reviewed so far. Chapter One - Part Two Under review. 0/1 Necromancers + 0/1 Dragon Ladies have reviewed so far. Chapter Two Under review. 0/1 Necromancers + 0/1 Dragon Ladies have reviewed so far. Chapter Three Under review. 0/1 Necromancers + 0/1 Dragon Ladies have reviewed so far. Chapter Four Under review. 0/1 Necromancers + 0/1 Dragon Ladies have reviewed so far. ....................................

theboss

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Wed Jun 22, 2011 8:19 am

theboss says... · Wed Jun 22, 2011 8:19 am

Could yu please take a look at my short story? :smt002

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spiderman

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Wed Jun 22, 2011 12:39 pm

spiderman says... · Wed Jun 22, 2011 12:39 pm

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Please and thank you!

Despite the lies that you're making
Your love is mine for the taking
My love is just waiting
To clothe you in crimson roses

WHISPERS IN THE DARK LYRICS - SKILLET

Kagi

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Fri Jun 24, 2011 12:16 pm

Kagi says... · Fri Jun 24, 2011 12:16 pm

You dawgs, are genius!

What a cunning little business you've got going here. You smart people. This is really awesome.
So, here you go;
This is basically describing a scene and tesing my ability to create images, might be a little un-interesting but we'll have to deal with that one- :lol:

Thanks, and just because I'm really wowed by this whole thing, I might consider paying you. You know, in points. I know you already get points from the reviews that you do, but why not earn extra? So, how does 50 points per person sound depending on the length of the review?

Just shows how much I like this little thing.

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