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Hey there, YWS!

I have been here for a little while and have given some reviews here and there, but I think I work better when someone is specifically asking for a review. Gives me a reason to put aside time for that. I am currently in university, so don't be offended if it takes a couple days before I do review something requested but if that does happen I'll be sure to message you at least so you know that I did see your post and will review in the near future.

Here is what I will review!

Scripts ---> 9 years of experience in reading, acting, directing, ect. so preferred section.
Action/Adventure
Science Fiction
Fantasy
Fan Fiction ---> Don't be surprised if I hadn't heard of source material. General public impressions.

I cannot review/not very good at:
Lyrics
Poetry
Art and Photos

I will prefer if you can post a link just so it will make it easier for me to get to the story.

Can't wait to see your works!! :smt003
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Will you review my poem for school? It doesn't have a name. :D I know that you said you won't review poetry, but you don't have ny requests yet so I thought that you might. Plus, if you don't want to I still bumped your thread up.

Thanks a bunch,

A. S.




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Hey would you mind reveiwing this for me? Please and thank you.




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Done and done! 8)
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Hey, would you mind reviewing "Hatched Chapter One" for me? Thanks in advance! post770582.html#p770582
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would you mind reviewing my twilight daga fanfic i don't have a title yet but i just want to get some opinions on it topic70355
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Done! :D
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Wonderin' if you could review my revision of Hatched? topic70899.html

Thanks in advance!
"They can put me in prison but they can't stop my face from breakin' out."

" A smile is a curve that can set a lot of things straight."

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I wonder if you can make this review for me so yeah :L

Here is my first chapter of The Bourreau and the Waltz Dancer:
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14 years have passed
And yet I'm unabled
To find a friend
For my existence is lower
Than a piece of grass.




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Done and Done! Very good writings!
Bees: They sting because they love!!

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Hiya!
When you have the time, could you please review this for me? It is the first part of my fantasy novel, White Eyes.
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Thank you so much in advance,
Ignis :pirate3:
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A thousand times it calls your name
A thousand times you hear it
And fools are those who heed its call
But fools are those who fear it.


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This one please: post776881.html#p776881
I'm begging for reviews because I'm really uncertain. Was it a good idea to compress a novel into a novella length while retaining the structure of a novel proper? Does a YA a sci-fi thriller suffer or gain from scattered descriptions, simplified psychological portraits and constant point of view jumping? I need someone to tell meeeee :mrgreen:
Thanx in advance
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Need a review for my poem- Memory Of You
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Hey, please review this. It's just a short prologue, and I'm new-ish to writing so I'd really appreciate any help and advice that I can get. Thanks!
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And Voldy's gone moldy, so now let's have fun!

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Can you take a look at my story? If you can get to it tonight, I'd be forever grateful, but if not, that's okay too.

viewtopic.php?t=71380

Thanks in advance,
-Addict
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