I'm Doing This For You

I'm doing this for you. So be grateful.

I'll be brief so you don't get too bored. I'll do any poem and most short stories of any rating. I will not do anything twilight related. If you ask me to, I will hunt you down and force feed you cabbage. (even thought it's not that bad.)

Hey there,
I am from New Zealand and really need some feedback on my poem "Clouds"
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If you could have a look soon that would be great
Thanks, Oliver (age 17)

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