Harley Quinn

This is my drawing of Harley Quinn from Arkham Asylum the game.

Hello there

Impressive. I think you have potential. The body looks great. I just think the arm on the left (my left ) is a little bigger than it's supposed to be and then it makes the lower body look a little smaller than the upper body. But I still like it.
You should keep at this.

Hiya,

Doesn't Harley Quinn wear a red and black joker's costume? I'm confused. Anyway, this was pretty good. I can definitely see the potential is there and you're starting to become more aware of depth and three dimension that comes with drawing. The color and shading is pretty good as well.

However, my main problem lies with the proportions. Did you look at a picture of Harley Quinn when you drew this, or just re-create it from memory. Her eyes look really weird--is the blue supposed to be a mask or her irises? It's hard to tell. If it's the former, her mask is actually black and human irises are not that huge (If you need to, look at yourself in the mirror and you'll see). Her breasts don't seem like they're really there, as the pads under her shirt are pushed way up. Look at a picture of any woman you'll see that they're down, and have more of an outward curve. The arms look somewhat odd, as she has one really long arm with a short forearm (right) and one really short arm with a really long forearm. They're both in the same position and Harley looks otherwise straight, so I don't think you did this intentionally? Anyway.

Overall, you have a nice drawing style and it will be interesting to see it develop. Good luck, and PM me if you have any questions!

-Elinor x

I agree with Eli. This shows potential, but the overall look is very awkward. Her body is rather disproportionate. If you fix the things Eli mentioned, it should fix that a bit. Her face is a little lumpy too. One side is bigger than the other.

One of my problems is her hair. it has to texture to it. It's like two yellow balloons on her head. When drawing hair, you need to capture each individual strand/clump. Unless they use unruly amounts of gel, hair never tapers to a point, either.

I think you have a lot of potential! Keep drawing, and you'll only get better.

-Dreamy

This is really good. So good job. I like the way you made everything red and blue, and in opposite order. But I think her...um... breast needs to be changed. First I'd make them the same color, and then I wouldn't just make them appear as lumps on top of her shirt.

Also, I don't know if it's suppose to be this way, but the top of her head doesn't seem quite the right shape.

And the bottom of her shirt is kind of crooked.

But these are just me being picky, I really do like it. Please keep drawing, and never give up.

~Dragonet~