If you review my work I will give you a hundred thousand spider eyes wrapped in a pretty red box with a pretty purple ribbon sitting pretty under an electrocuted Christmas tree.
you're scared of basic emotions you say that they're fragile just like china cups
Hello! So I was wondering if you might review We All Are Birds. for me? Pretty pwease?
I haven't written anything in a VERY long time, and I'm just started to get back in the groove of things, so please be honest and tell me what I need to work on.
It looks as though you're kind of busy at the moment, but when you get the time, could you please review the next part of my story for me? It's kind of long, I hope you don't mind...! Take as long as you want.
Heylo! I was wondering if you would please do a review for 'The Kirja'?
I do have a website for it, but the critique from the people on it doesn't go much above
'gd. grammer probs tho.'
Dx So I'd really like some honest, helpful advice on what I need to improve on.
As a bribe... I was thinking;
This wonderful selection of vampire tongues, displayed in this quality crystal cabinet. They're guaranteed to make you sparkle more than... more than... urm... They'll make you sparkle, m'kay?
ladymask wrote:I just want to say, you are a freaking superhero.
Yes, you are.
I have returned... mwhahahaha. Ha. I've posted the next chapter of my story and I'd be ever so grateful if you unleashed your reviewing powers on it and reviewed it for me. If you agree to review, you get him.
Spoiler
I was actually going to give you this guy, Spoiler
but then I realised that the first guy was way hotter.
It suddenly struck me that that tiny pea, pretty and blue, was the Earth. I put up my thumb and shut one eye, and my thumb blotted out the planet Earth. I didn't feel like a giant. I felt very, very small. — Neil Armstrong
Also, a witty homeless man!
