Yeah I saw the title "Saving Lilly" and immediately was hooked.You should check out my prologue The Girl with The Cheetah Scar. I'm almost done with the chapter 1 and about to submit it !
"The mark of your ignorance is the depth of your belief in injustice and tragedy. What the caterpillar calls the end of the world, the Master calls the butterfly." ~ Richard Bach
Your hesitation suggests you are trying to protect my feelings. However, since I have none, I would prefer you to be honest. An artist's growth depends upon accurate feedback. — LCDR Data