The Fallen

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This is an SB about fallen angels, but it is a completely fictional storyline of where they went. The bible says that they all went to hell, but in this SB, some stayed on earth.
The plot is similar to the Blue Blood series by Mellisa DeLaCruz, except you are not a vampire. You are one of the original fallen angels, a follower of Lucifer. You were banished from heaven but decided you didn't really want to be a follower anymore and go to hell, so you are stuck on earth. You are somewhat immortal and superhuman, but you age, only to be reborn. You might be reborn seconds after you die, or you might be reborn a century from when you die. The people you are born to would be angels themselves.
Since you live on earth you have no choice but to live among the humans, they do not know that you are any different from them but obviously you are. You all mostly know eachother, or know about eachother at least. You all have formed a secret society type thing, when you come of age, (16) you learn all about it and learn who else in your modern day world are fallens. You live in New York, mostly upperclass, but you don't really have to be.
Also, when you are 16 you start to make the "transformation" you remember your past lives. And the like awesome thing is, they can have flashbacks and remember things from pretty much anytime humans existed, because the fall of Lucifer was even before Christ, so it could get really interesting
Basically, there isn't to much of a story line, I am leaving it up to you. You could have romances, have friendships, have enemies, make humans find out about them and try and hunt us down, have flashbacks and memories, have people know people from past lives, or even have a follower of Lucifer still among them, corrupting people. It is mainly up to you.

RULES -

- No god-modding
- Yes, you are immortal but you are not god. Don't act like it.
- Your charater is allowed to be flawless on the outside, actually, it is expected of an angel, but they must have at least one real weakness.
- swearing sure, no f word though.
- Romance is okay, just no descriptive sex scens. No one wants to read that.
- I want this to be a quality SB, posts must be at least 400 characters long and if your post is very poor grammar wise, I will not hesitate to ask you to fix it.
- As for your angel name, you must have name and Angel of ______. Choose what ever you want but just remeber, you are fallen, you are not going to be the Angel of Purity or Goodness.

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Name -
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Gender-
Age-
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Weaknesses-
Likes-
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CHARACTERS- I will make more if there is interest, but we need to keep the ratio even.

Girls-
1. Me - Sara
2. Chupatoasta -
3. ninjacookiemonster - Anya
4. Ladyofthedeathroses - Aurora

Boys-
1. sunstarfrozenlife - Aries
2. Greed - Victor
3. Forestqueen808 - Jake
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** will finish soon.

Name - Sara Dillon
Angel Name- Seraphiel, Angel of Destruction
Gender- Female
Age- 17
Personality- Sara is quiet and very laid back. Being "popular" is not a concern of hers, she doesn't try and find it and it obviously doesn't find her. She can be quite sarastic and it can come across as rude often, though she rarely means it. Get to know her, truly, and you will uncover a quiet, sweet girl, with plenty of quirks.
Strengths- Her wall flower tendencies, the fact that she knew she was an angel by the age of 9,
Weaknesses- Sara has extreme Claustrophobia.
Likes- Music, drawing, reading, walks in the park, anything quiet.
Dislikes- Jocks, large crowds, noise, bad music, jerks.
History- Sara has lived with her grandmother since she was 9, her parents died in a car wreck, or so she was told. sara sunk into such a deep and unhealthy depression for a nine year old that her grandmother told her everything. That she was an angel, that she was immortal, so were her parents. They were in a car wreck but they were not killed, it is an impossible idea. Her grandmother said they must have disappeared, she has no idea why, but she does know one thing, it was by choice. Sara has one true dream, to find them again.
Up for love- Heck yes!
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I claim a spot for a girl :D
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Name - Aries
Angel Name- Angel of Fallen Stars
Gender- Male
Age- 17
Personality- He's quiet, dark, and likes to be alone. He's secretive.
Strengths- Fast, Strong, Smart
Weaknesses- Not strategic, makes decisions too quickly.
Likes- Powers, friends, the society.
Dislikes- Humans in General, Lucifer, Hell
History- He has a long history. I don't want it to be revealed just yet so I'll tell you all as the story progresses.
Up for love- Mmhm.
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And mine, Lament of Innocence!
And LDR's, Dark Fey!
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Name - Victor Reed

Angel Name- Zeryx, Angel of Despair

Gender- Male

Age- 19

Personality- Victor is the kind of person who puts himself before others. He lives for himself and only himself. He doesn't care about the other Fallen. He's a very manipulative person and uses those around him.

Strengths- Has the ability to cast illusions.

Weaknesses- Other than his power he has average angel stats. Average strength and speed by their standards.

Likes- Scotch, despair, pain.

Dislikes- Everything else.

History- Will be revealed latter.

Up for love- No

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****NOTE
Your angel name needs a name and an Angel of ______. For example I am Serapiel, Angel of Destruction. They shouldn't be the same name because in your life up until 16 you thought you were just a normal person. If you have your name for this life and you are over the age of 16 and you know your angel name and prefer to be called it then specify that please.
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What the heck, I'll join.

Name - Anya Joney

Angel Name- Anyaliese, Angel of Death (sorry for un-creativity.)

Gender- Female

Age- 16

Personality- Anya is very quiet, but not shy. She'll fight for whatever team pays her better, and doesn't attach herself to anyone or anything. She's a sort of mercenary, and will do whatever she has to to survive. However, she does have some morals, and will follow them to the end.

Strengths- quick thinking, fast, stealthy, street smart.

Weaknesses- Not incredibly strong, doesn't do well under stress or pressure, terrified of snakes, violent.

Likes- fighting, music, nighttime, the cold.

Dislikes- being still, silence, the beach, heat.

History- Anya grew up in the quiet suburbs, in a private school. When she was ten, she started becoming violent and angry, and ran away from home. A week later, she found out her parents were dead. She has since learned to control herself, and became first a high end thief, and later, an assassin. She now lives in her own place, at the top of the food chain, killing to survive.

Up for love- Yuppers.

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hey, Jude, don't make it bad
take a sad song and make it better
remember to let it into your heart
then you can start
to make it better.

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Name - Jake Peterson

Angel Name- Maxim, Angel of Terror

Gender- Male

Age- Just turned 16

Personality- Jake is one word: trouble. He is always getting in trouble at school, at home, its not like he isn't born into a good family. He's just...angry all the time, more or less, he's scared half the time, beneath the anger that is. He would never let anyone know that he is scared, he just fights them off, to make them think he is brave.

Strengths- He is very intimidating, plus, he is a bad boy, which kinda makes him a ladies man sometimes. If you call that a strength. He can also hide his emotions very well.

Weaknesses- He is scared, and pretty vulnerable, but he covers that up. A weakness of his, along with his strength, is hiding his emotions from people.

Likes- He likes fighting. He also likes to be in charge and to be a leader.

Dislikes- People who don't fit in, people who think they are so much better, and half the time...just people.

History- Jake has always been a trouble maker, its been hard for his parents especially. They adopted him when he was two years old, they were warned not to take him because of his already bad attitude, but his parents insisted. Since then, he has always been in trouble.

Up for love- Yep

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Sorrow lasts through this night
I'll take this piece of you,
and hold for all eternity
For just one second I felt whole... as you flew right through me.


~Sorrow by Flyleaf




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Name - Aurora *Goes by Dawn*
Angel Name- Ariana Angel of Darkness
Gender- F
Age- 16
Personality- a very sweet and well mannered girl is very kind and understanding and brilliant, she is curious but doesn't express her curiousty, she is very well thought and sarcastic she isn't afraid to speak her mind she is also very sweet, funny, optimistic, sassy, bold, courageous, and a good listener. She can make friends with anyone or anything with in a few minutes. She can be childish at times . She has a very quick temper If you make her cry she will hunt you down and rip you limb from limb. She is often depressed and in pain. She lives by If you fake a smile you can fool the whole world into thinking your fine which is what she does and she does fool a lot of people unless you can read her.

Strengths- Has the ability to manipulate shadows and give people nightmares and can drive people insane. Can fight with anything you give her but prefers swords and knives. She is mentally,musically and artistacally gifted and will often draw play sing things that describe how she feels which is often dark.
Weaknesses- Her temper is very easily triggered she broke her wrist when she was twelve and it will go numb and she has to force it to move.
Likes- Fire roses cold black pain Listening/singing/playing music, death, all her hobbies, drawing, boys, being herself, animals the night, and twilight.

Dislikes- Humans Hell Lucifer.
History- Her mother and father abandoned her and her sister when she was 5 but her sister was killed she knows her sister has been reborn but she doesn't know where.
Up for love- Um Boo YAH!
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* I am going to try and make the opening post if it sucks sorry*
Aurora
I sat curled up on a bench in Central Park music blasting through my headphones a duffle bag by my side along with a guitar case and several sketchpads pastels pencils and paints. This was so reminiscent it was ridiculous. *Flashback* Laura was 10 I was 8 curled up on the same bench my head leaning on her. "So what are we going to do?" I asked quietly. "I don't know Sissy." She replied. I sat up well got up and grabbed my duffle bag. "Where are you going?" Laura asked incredously. I grinned easily at her and replied "Their house isn't that far from here and as far as I know it hasn't been rented and we can get in." She blinked then jumped up with a happy whoop. I grinned again. We walked calmly out of Central Park and onto the busier sidewalk. It was a few streets over when I crossed the street without looking. "AURORA!!" Laura screamed as she pushed me out of the way. I landed hard on my hands and knees and turned expecting to see Laura right behind me but instead I saw her being hit by a black van every small detail was remarkbly clear. I could see the shock and pain in Laura's face as the van hit her. Her head rolled to the side, and I heard several popping noises. The van slammed on it's brakes and reality set in. I ran over to Laura calling her name over and over again as if it were some magic spell that would bring her back to life. Her legs and arms were twisted in wierd ways. Her face and entire body had cuts all over and she was soon soaking an a giant puddle of her own blood. I pulled her head in my lap and put my forehead to hers desperately sobbing. "Onee-chan wake up please wake up don't leave me. Please don't leave me." I sobbed over and over again. The door slammed and the driver who didn't even look old enough to be behind the wheel came out. "Is she ok?" He asked. I snapped I jumped on him and punched him with every single ounce of strength I had left which was enough to break his nose and dislocate his jaw. "Call for help." I said icily. He nodded forgiving because of what I was going through. I went back to Laura and brushed the hair out of her face feeling the tears well up and start again. I kissed her forehead and whispered quietly " Ave Maria Gratia plena Dominus tecum
Benedicta tu in mulieribus Et benedictus fructus ventris Tui, Jesus Sancta Maria Mater Dei Ora pro nobis peccatoribus
Nunc et in hora mortis nostrae Amen." I stood up and grabbed my things and Laura's walking past everyone who had gathered in the crowd. I walked back into central park and curled onto a ball onto the bench again then I went into a crying jag and it started to rain as though the heavens were weeping with me *End Flashback* I sat up and sighed dropping my head onto my knees. Well a few years after that I had found the other angels discovering my powers and they told me everything. "Hey Sara." I said not turning around.
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**Hey jemmy... I'm gonna have to drop this, sorry): I want to make it a little even, so yeah! I'm so so so sorry!**
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Anya

I felt a twinge of something as I watched the boy kiss the girl goodnight. And at the rose exhibit, how coincidental. I brushed the twinge away. Now is not the time to fantasize, Anya, I told myself. He is a target, and you are his killer. Simple. Now go do your job. I nodded and ducked my head behind my sniper rifle. 3...2....1. I smiled a little as that familiar, almost comforting sight unfolded: a person slumping to the ground, that slightly puzzled expression on their face.

Night-night, lover boy.

I smiled a little more, disassembled the weapon, and dumped the parts in my bag. I mussed my hair, jumped up and down a little, and promptly broke into a sprint down the hall. "Whoa, whoa there missy, museum's closed," a deep voice said. I stumbled to a stop and pushed my blond hair out of my face.

"I'm sorry, I know, I was here for a project for school, and time got away from me, I suppose," I said breathlessly. I bit my bottom lip. This is where I had to trust that blond haired, blue eyed, sixteen year old, all-american charm would work. He smiled sympathetically. "Go on, then, Miss...?"

"Joney."

"Well, be on your way then, Miss Joney,"

I nodded and shouted a thank you over my shoulder. Good work, Anya. The money will be in your apartment, a voice crackled. I nodded to it, knowing my employer most likely had eyes on me. I was at the apartment in record time, and as promised, so was the money.

Money and satisfaction: the two reasons I was a professional assassin.
hey, Jude, don't make it bad
take a sad song and make it better
remember to let it into your heart
then you can start
to make it better.

~make books, not war~

"Not vampires, fish from space."



'Hush, hush!' I whispered; 'people can have many cousins and of all sorts, Miss Cathy, without being any the worse for it; only they needn't keep their company, if they be disagreeable and bad.
— Emily Bronte, Wuthering Heights