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This is a little something I created in Adobe Photoshop. It's somewhat of a dedication to this site and all the help that it has given me, not to mention the hundreds of other writers. The font you see is in fact the one from Star Wars. Hope you like it. Thank you YWS.
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I knew it was from StarWars! Unmistakable! xD
It's awesome, well done. But I think you an improve on the fact that the background looks like it's going through the text, the text and background are too similar. If you get what I mean. Make sure they are both their own, definite layers ect.
Well done once again! That's Durrie's view in there.
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OMG, this is so cute. I can’t really say anything negative about it except for agreeing with what Durrie said with the text really needing to stand out. I think this really only goes for “Writers” and the top half of “Society.” Altering something as simple as the contrast or the brightness might clean that up.

But this is definitely a YWS epic.
Good job, Prism.

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Iunno, I like it how it is- it looks like it is made from embossed metal. Star wars is win, also. =D
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Nice, but I think maybe you should make it more personal? Thanks for all the work though.




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This is sort of personal, but like I said this is my dedication to the site and its creators and such. Many more personal artworks are coming soon.
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This is awesome. The only thing, was, that you're missing the 'the'.

*thinks*

Haha, who cares! ^^ This looks perfect anyway. Great work, and I love the Star Wars font choice, and the background.

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PS Oh, wouldn't it be cool if, instead of the sword and the pencil, you did a light saber and a pencil? Hm...
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Ha I was thinking that, I even edited and put in a pencil to see if it would fit..it didn't really. But its fine without it nontheless.
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Awesome! Have you ever read any of the Fanfictions by me or Griffinkeeper. You should look up some stories about the SPEW Gryphon. Your art piece there fits it well.
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This looks good! There isn't a way by any chance for you to send me a copy that's 1280px by 1024px? We used to have an area of the site where you could download wallpapers for your desktop, and I'm working on bringing that back.




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Hi
I really like this and it looks really cool. :elephant:
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Whoa! Luffly job, there! I love the Star Wars font, its completely awesomesauce, just like the whole dang picture! It's wonderful, really. I want it on my desktop. XD.
Great work, Prism. This was really cool. I liked the texture, as well. Adobe Photoshop can do wonders, eh? Nice job, again.
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I could totally tell where the font was from! STARWARS! Hrm... Nice job! YWS has done a lot for me too. It has given me a way to express myself in writing and I like to help other people with their work. It also passes time, so when I'm bored, I come here... So uh, it's great of you to dedicate this to YWS! And plus, it's great!
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Hey there!

This is unmistakably Star Wars inspired! Haha, I do love it. Though there is, as always, room for improvement. For a start, I'd bump up the "Writers" word so it's closer to the top bar and I'd bump society up a little bit more as well so that there is an even spacing between Society and the bottom bar and Writers and the top bar. You know?

Also, I think, as logos proportions are vital to a good graphic, I think the Society's letters should be expanded in width and the spacing between each character enlarged by say, erm, 5pt.? This should make it rough bit smaller than the word "Writer's", but bigger than it is now so that it is more in proportion compared with the rest of the logo.

Besides that point, I really liked the texture background, the colours you've chosen, the font and the idea to put "Young" amidst the top bar. It's very good indeed!

Hope this helps,
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Ah, yes. Star Wars! How could I have not seen it?
Haha, well this is really cool but my only complaint is that the text may need to stand out a bit more. Perhaps messing with the contrast a little would change that?
Either way, this is great. :)
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