SIS Help/Discussion DT

Okay. It's not that I'm unsure about what is going on or that I'm lost, I just don't know what to post. That's why I haven't really posted in a while. I don't want to write a post that is completely pointless, it would annoy everyone else and it would annoy me as well. If I write a post, I want to make it have some kind of point. So yeah... any suggestions?

The same for me. Now we're going to have an explosion in the bookshop very soon if I'm correct? Maya, any indication about it? I guess the bunker is a safe place but upstairs won't be the same, right?

@Skins: Your character can be helping Reet, Sam and Clint with the disposal of the body, so read over Mr.Knightley's posts and it should give you a general idea.

@Lila: Since you're in Team Alpha perhaps you could be double checking the bookshop is secure and on the way back you could notice something suspicious about Foxfire's (Maya's) character.

About the Base "blowing up": It won't. It'll be too annoying to decide a new location, so perhaps Jagged's Clint Lawson could disarm the booby trap or something.

New Teams: Updated due to Death and Reassignment of CLINT and TY SIRUS.

Uh, can Erika come in and help dispose of the body? I feel like she has nothing to do, right now. Besides, it would make sense if she was with Reet before.

Sounds good Elinor

I will post soon, I need to get really caught up lol, I think I'm going to skip over the mission, and just go from where everyone is now. Or should I go from the mission...thoughts?

Skip over the mission. Have Fey answer that she didn't get any bugs placed as she hadn't even got any yet (it was Fey Ty thought he was giving the bugs to when he set the alarms off) and you can have Naomi say she got the four upstairs offices bugged but neither of the elevators. She'd probably try to answer professionally but come across as being rather smug.

Gr...I'm just going to pretend that what Foxfire posted about the bomb in Clara's mouth hasn't happened yet, seeing as we haven't gotten that far in the flipping storybook. 'kay? Please read the posts, Firefox and let our characters finish what they were supposed to be doing before you skip ahead to when they're all gone. Still, it's too late now.

*will post tomorrow.*

I'm sorry but can people kind of slow down a little bit? I mean there was a mission, it went wrong, some one's mother shows up, another agent gets rid of her, then someone dies, there's a double agent, one agent is being held by REAF, then there's a bomb now in the dead person...All in like two or three pages...I know you need conflict to make a good story...but this is getting a little crazy... Just my opinion *shrug*

I second Timmy and Hope.

I third Timmy, Hope, and Bolt!

I fourth!

Yeah I agree too XD I think the next aim needs to be that roll call, realise we're missing two agents and then plan a recovery mission. Not go on a recovery mission. Plan it. They need to stop leaping into things and start acting professional.

I fifth myself ('cause I'm cool like that), Bond, Bolt, Mizzle, Skins, and I second Kitty.

But how are we supposed to do the roll call thingy now to figure out who the traitor is when Lila (Lolryne's charrie) found the bomb and voiced her thoughts about Maya doing it? And then Hayley was talking to Guv'nor about it. It's all very complex... Dx

I think we need to go back, and people need to edit/delete posts. Decide what plot points you want to keep in for now, then add the rest in later. Obviously Mixed still needs to be dead,I think Jax's mother can be brought back in later, if you want to try that bit of conflict later, because it kind of ended that before anything could be done with it.

But I think there's going to be a lot of tweaking we need to go back and do now.