I'm really please with this, i didn't copy it from anything ha ha. I hope you like it too. :p
My manga girl drawing
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Like it, review it, whatever.
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I like the effort Special praise on making the hair flow, good job.
Now mine you, I tend to be blunt, so try not to be offended by my review
The face looks a bit flat. The eye and mouth seem to be the distinct problem - perhaps you need to curve the eye that's farther away up instead of down? Same with the mouth. Also, I noticed that there isn't much curve on the side of the face. If you look at your face in the mirror, it dips, especially under the brow. The side should be more curved, and you should definitely put in a brow where the eyebrow rests.
Some of the hair looks more clumped than it needs to be, but other than that I really like the hair. Good job.
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A couple of little things... she doesn't really have a nose and the smile, coupled with the wide eyes, looks a bit creepy! Also, her chest doesn't really seem to fit. So yeah. Other than that, your perspective on the face was good and I really love her hair and ears.
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This is good. I like the hair. My tip is to make sure the pupils go the same direction. If they're only slightly off, she looks a little zoned out. Don't worry, I've had the same problem too.
