I'm not sure exactly what it is everyone has their own imagination and thought on what it could be!!! Sorry you can't see it very well better then before!
Last edited by KAH on Fri Nov 19, 2010 2:22 am, edited 9 times in total.
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First off...holy crap on a cracker that's big O_O.
Second Is it the little thing on the right? Because right now that's the only thing that looks at all like a flower to me. The big huge thing in the middle, what is that? If you could just explain what it is I could do a way better review xD. I love the colors you used though, very nice .
So yes, re size it first, then you'll probably get more reviews on it .
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Anyway! My main comment is that it really doesn't look like a flower... it looks more like a fish! In particular, it reminds me of those goldfish in Fantasia. So it's very beautiful! Just... I don't know. More like a fish than a flower.
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Hmmmmmm, from what I can see I like it. It looks like you worked hard to make it, but in few strokes of the pencil. It does look like sort of flower. It almost seems as if the stem is in the wrong place though, from the center of the flower not the end. A. S.
Well, to me it kinda looks like a flower or a head with its hair covering the face then with a fish body so like a flower-fish.... the colors are nice, did you use markers or pencil? I cant really tell. -Bumblebee
Heya Kah! Skins here to review. Don't take my review too seriously, I don't really know much about art. I like drawing, I just have no idea about specific techniques or anything...
My main problem is the size of this image; it's rather large, isn't it? When you have an oversized image, it drives reviewers away. Elinor Brynn has written a very good thread about resizing images. Check it out, it would definitely help you! Here's the link, you should definitely check it out!
Overall, what I can see of this, I really like! I love the simplicity of it and I very much like the colours that you have used. I also think that the way you've used the pencil is very effective. It looks like you've simply stroked the paper a few times and ended up with a really pretty picture! It looks effortless, but in a very, very good way.
My only critique is that I kind of agree with Snoink; this looks a bit fishy. Although, that's probably because I can't see the picture very well. If you resize it, be sure to PM me and tell me! I'd love to see this in a smaller size. That way, I could give you a better review, as well.
You've resized it. I can see it much clearer now. Thanks!
Now that I can see it better, I still really like it. I love the uniqueness to it and I love how it plays with my imagination. It looks like a flower, but then again, it looks like a jellyfish. If I look again, it looks like a regular fish, then it looks like a flower again. I love that about this picture; it's as if we decide what it is.
Yeah... I really like this! I'm glad you managed to resize it as well.
I'm not sure if I've ever reviewed any off your work so I'll start off by saying: Hello, I'm RepublicOfCoter but people generally call me R.O.C. I was suggested to review some of your work by one of my friends. Now, I haven't really reviewed many drawings so, here I go!
I love the abstractiness (I don't think that's a word...oh well) of the drawing; I think it's a fantastic idea to leave it untitled and with no description so you can get your reviewers to use their imagination! Nice job! Now, what does it look like? I personally think it depicts two people (pink figures) dancing together. I think that since their is no solid colour throughout the drawing, it just enhances the look.
Fantastic work!
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Hiya KAH! This is very nice. I have discerned from my predeceasing reviewers that since their comments you have downsized the whole thing - good idea It is a nice little pattern thingumajig. It's quite imaginative, the colours and the swirls ... and don't worry about not knowing what it is, some of my drawings are even less easily definable! You're right about the fact that it isn't the clearest of pictures (line-wise, it isn't very vivid), but it isn't actually that bad. The pictures I have tried to put on here have ended in disaster - you literally can't see them. I have a feeling I've been missing something ... but oh well. Overall, I like this. It's quite simple, but at the same time managing to hold some detail that you have to search for. Very good work. - Ignis
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Kay...so...um...this was supposed to be a flower? Now this isn't entirely a bad thing...that someone didn't know quite what the picture was about...And heres why...one...art...VERY VERY VERY!!!!subjective. and two...well I kinda like the kind of art you do...keeps you guessing, you know? And lets see...i think it looks a lot like a jelly fish...i can see a rose now...now i see that fantasia fish...Oh yeah and three...it's not bad at all...maybe some shading here and there...a little more contrast between the colors...(You picked one of my favorite complimentary colors! ) ~Skittles P.S. keep drawing...and don't let the harsh critiques let you down!
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When I look at this I see a fish more than a flower but then if I look at it more closely then I see a flower again. But anyway I like the colours you have used and yeah does it really matter what it is? It could just be an abstract piece which is cool. I think it just depends, like you say, on the person who is looking at it to decide what it looks like to them
Anyway enough of my rambling. Just thought I would say that I liked it