Figure Drawing- Quiet.

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I did this at my figure drawing class. It took around 20 minutes, more or less. (Then again I tend to space out and just stare at it for half of my 'drawing' time XD) Basically, it's a sketch and isn't finished. Let me know what I can improve on and whatever else ^^ also you can check out my dA http://finishedmakingsense.deviantart.com/
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Hey finishedmakingsense! This is really cool. I think the proportions of the legs and the torso and how it's turned and the angle of the head are all really great. The only thing that looks awkward to me is the figure's forearm. It looks like it's about as big as her upper arm...?

Other than that, though, a really nice sketch. How long did it take you to do it?
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Hi there!

So, I think I like this. I like where you're going with it, but right now it looks like a rough skeleton for something that could be a lot better. I can see your original outline for the figure, and I think the lack of shading sort of clashes with the realistic view of the figure. Maybe you could add more to the face too? I can see that you tried to define the nose and eyes, but it looks kind of out of focus and messy.

Overall, I liked it, and I think you're a good artist. Keep at it! PM me if you have any questions.

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