This was really sweet. I'm literally holding back tears right now. I can tell you loved this girl. She sounds like a really sweet girl, and I feel for her loss, even though I never knew her. I wish I did. One thing I think you could expand on is the words you use to describe her at the end? Expand upon those! It will make the letter seem all the more sweeter.
PM me if you have any questions, and I hope things work out.
-Elinor xo
All our dreams can come true — if we have the courage to pursue them. -- Walt Disney
You really made me cry. That was short but so sweet. I could feel your deep affection for her. From those particular tree and candle service I could really tell she was something special. I really liked this.
Peace out!
"Life is a poem keep it in the present tense."-Sherrel Wigal