Mary-Sue: A life

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This story is good. I love it!
Personally I hate Mary-sues, but who doesn't.
This story gave me a good impression of a mary-sue and her daily life. (A)

I bet everyone who reads your story thinks twice about making a practically perfect charakter (AKA Mary Sue).
And I'm perfectly fine with that. *nods*
Well done!
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Wow, guys! Thanks soooo much for the featured and stuff! :DDDDDDDDD
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~




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Man! I wish I were friends with Mary-sue! And Gary-stu -- gosh, he's the darn-tootinest hottest man I've ever seen!

But really, this is great! It's got Mary-sue's down to a tee! Totally agree with everything in here!
"Man is least himself when he talks in his own person.

Give him a mask and he will tell you the truth."

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Haha, Jasmine! The first word that came to my mind when I was reading this was - LOL. Seriously, it's pure genius. Certainly deserves to be featured. ;) Only, now I'm kind of afraid of one day thinking up a Mary-Sue. :?
Anyway, great work, really funny. Keep writing, and don't you ever stop!
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Oh my goodness.. This was by far one of the best things I've read on this site ever. Ingenious!! But need I say more? It seems you've been discovered by all on this site. It seems any good review I give will probably seem as if it's already been said. But I will say this: your story made me think, laugh, and enjoy every single word right down until the end. So thank you for this piece of literary eye-candy. I absolutely LOVED it! Keep on writing!!!!! --Really!! :)
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Whoa! You tore it down.. This is like a blast.. really! This is one of the best pieces i've ever read! You have an awesomatic future.. You have completely mocked the hell outta them! Way to go..




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Haha this was great! I didn't know what a Gary-Stu was, but I knew what Mary Sue was! That was so true though, which was the bad part, but the worst part was that I felt guilty of doing that! :( This story really opened up my eyes, and I'm glad it was featured because some people might read it and change the way they write. Awesome job! :)
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Love. This piece is amazing, in a completely over-the-top way. Made me smile. Don't get me wrong, if I was reading that as a book, I'd shove it into a bin, but you've made it work really well. 24 Likes. Congrats, I've just made it 25.
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You, my girl, have captured the whole fantasy genre in this piece.
I love the piece, but I hate the fact that fantasy has been restricted to just a few imaginary creatures.
I am gonna change all that.
According to me, this piece makes a pretty strong statement. Although most probably it's unintentional.




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Woah. I got more likes for this than any other piece I've ever done. I'm not sure whether to be happy or sad, considering I wrote this as a joke...:D
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~




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Haha. I thought this was a really crappy story until I realised it was satire. I'd never heard of those terms before, (luckily TvTropes never disappoints) but still found this hilarious.
We're fools whether we dance or not, so we might as well dance.-Japanese Proverb




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AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA-takesabreath-AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

Loved that.

Mary-Sues/Gary-Stus annoy me, but I LOVE creating them on purpose.
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This has been featured for a while I think a couple of months ago. Never really got the chance to take a look at what it was about. But here I am... Dear Jas, Jash here for a quick review.

There was one sentence I didn't quite understand.

There is this one boy in school whose new.


But anyway, this story was full of nonsense that it was actually super fun to read. :lol: It's a good thing that this is very short and straight to the point with compound and simple sentences. That's really all I can say. xD

Keep writing!

~ Jash ♥
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not only because I see it, but because by it I see everything else.”


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