Vatican's Manor

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Vaticans Manor

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A thick shaft of the moons light shone downwards on the crumbling foundations of Vatican’s Manor illuminating the planked walls in an eerie light. The thick brass gates creaked back and forth as a gust of icy wind blew past the house.

The roses before the mauled steps, leading to the front door, wilted downwards towards the ground casting a frightening shadow across the dying grass.

Claw marks slashed the rotting window sills. What looked liked blood, pooled in the deep groves. A soft glow of fire licked behind the dust covered windows awaiting its prey.



Halloween- A night for dressing in ghoulish costumes and trick or treating though the streets claiming candy from people behind pale doors.

On Parkinson’s Road the Halloween night is all but a candy filled shamble. When the moon is full, the chirping of the crickets dims to a deathly silence, and the thick of night envelops the dying twilight, the games begin…

A group of youths enter Vatican’s manor in hope of winning extra candy…Instead they recieve more of a fright than they expected.

Ghouls of all shapes and sizes, angered spirits and dark lurchers inhabit the walls of the manor claiming live souls for a chance to feel “Reborn”.

The Game is simple:

Stay in the manor till sun up and you get extra candy. Come out of the Manor before the sun rises to its peek and the souls of the damned will come after you for their revenge.

Plot:

You are one of the group to enter the house on a foolish dare, the prize, all the children’s candy. Little do you know what awaits you behind the doors of the manor, you set out to seek your reward.

When you get in the Manor, everything you thought from a few cobs webs and rat skeletons change and the creatures of the night come out to play…

Rules:

:arrow: No God Modding
:arrow: No "Visual" Romance scenes
:arrow: No Bad Swearing or Cursing

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Name: Christina "Chrissie" Samson

Age:16

Gender: Female

Appearance and Halloween Costume:
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Personality: Energetic and easily amused, Chrissie loves to be in the spot light. She is very caring of others and though she seems obnoxious and fiery headed she can really some out to others as passoniate and kind loving.

History: Chrissie has lived on Parkinson's Road for most of her life, though has never head of "The Game". Her opinions on Vatican's Manor as exact to others around her, "A place to freaky to be around".

Her mother is a very strong alchoholic never really caring about her daughters where abouts. Her brother, A surfer, is always working over time meaning that Chrissie never has anyone really to become close to.

Flaws: Acts before thinking.

Other: She loves candy, doing anything to get her hands on the sweet stuff. Up for love.
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I'm in. :lol: This will be fun.

Here's my profile.

Name: Blaire Rowan.
Age: 17.
Gender: Female.
Appearance and Halloween Costume: Blaire has brown hair and grey-green eyes. Her costume is a gypsy costume:
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with a hooded cloak, like this:
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Personality: Blaire is kind but harsh. She doesn't like her name and if you use it, she will snap at you. Blaire isn't easily scared but when she is scared, you'll know about it.
History: Blaire has lived on Parkinson's Road for several years and though she lives at the over end of the road, she’s cautious of the Manor. Her father is a drunk and her mother is dead. Blaire is only in this for the fame. She’s extremely curious to see if the stories about Vatican's Manor are true.
Flaws: Doesn't think before reacting, often too harsh on people.
Other: People often call her Rowan because she hates Blaire. She has no idea why her mother decided to call her that as it always reminds her of The Blaire Witch Project and the movie freaks her out. She’s up for love and believes in the paranormal.
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Resistance only gets one handcuffed so, here goes!
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Name: Lexie "Lex" Mayil
Age: 16
Picture: http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_30PRmkOl4ro/S ... fa+xin.jpg
Coustume: She's dressed up as a dark pixie. http://pics.picidc.com/space/fkang93336 ... ess7-1.jpg
Personality: She's engertic and hyper, especially on today because of the candy. She's loving, sweet, and hates violence and mean people. She will never do anything to hurt another and hates being alone-especially in the dark-.
History: She was born in Japan but moved to the states when she was 12, speaks fluent Japanese and will sometimes convert to that lanaguage if she gets really emotional-scared, happy, excited, etc.-. She will also say small little things in Japanese so no one knows what's she's saying.
Flaws: She's too trusting of others and gets attatched too easy.
Other: She loves lollipops and plays the piano really well. She's really flexible and silent when she moves around.
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I love this idea! I'm in!

Name: Jake Sommers
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Appearance and Halloween Costume: Best pic I could find of him, sorry:
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Dressed as a Marine:
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Personality: Friendly but introverted, quiet and thoughtful, usually likes being on his own
History: Lived in this town his whole life, always heard scary stories about the Manor and has walked by it before, but never had the courage to go in until now
Flaws: Doesn't communicate well with others, and doesn't really listen to others' opinions when his own has been made
Other: He's a lefty; up for love
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Hey Apple, can I play a ghost? Maybe someone who came into the manor last year and didn't make it though the night? Please?
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Yeppums you can be a ghost, gsppcrocks10. :D
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Sweet. :D I'll post my profile in a bit.
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Can I join? *Gets on knees and pleads* I'll make a guy character, the ratio looks a little wide.

Name: Ben Manson

Age:17

Gender:Male

Appearance and Halloween Costume:

I can't find a picture so I am going to explain it.

His general appearance is long blood red hair that flicks around his ears is a surfer kind of way. Summary: Surfer hair.
He has hazel eyes that are more chocalte brown than they are moss green. He is tall for his age and slim built with a wincy bit of muscles though not "Built!". He has a few freckles on his cheeks though they are hardly recogniseable.

His costume is dracula.... Muhahaha, "I'll suck your blood!". Black cloak with a blood red under. A white shirt that is slightly open at the top and black cropping pants.

Personality: Quiet and often suspicious, Ben doesn't really associate himself with the other kids of the street.

History:Ben has always had the dream that he and his sisyer Larni would enter Vatican's Manor and return victorious. Though, when Larni became very sick and forced onto life support the dream slipped through Ben fingers. When Larni finally passed away last year, Ben promised that he would enter the house for the both of them.

Flaws:He doesn't trust at all, often pushing others away.

Other:Up for love.




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Great Profiles guys! I guess I'm going to start now, and here we going!

Chrissie~

“Trick or treat!” I trilled at the elderly standing shiftily in the front door. A smile broke across her face as she pulled out a dish filled with taffy’s.

“It’s a little late to be trick or treating little girl” She said her hands shaking with old age. I shook my head opening my bag, “No ma’am this is when the good sweets come out!”

Nodding she dropped the taffy’s into the fake pumpkin lantern, “Lots of things come out at this hour”. A gust of icy wind blew at my face making me wince, the hair on my neck standing on end.

The door closed simultaneously leaving me in the eerie darkness. Turning away I began to walk down the stairs, “What did she mean?” I cocked my head to the side and shrugged.

Scuffing the dirt with my foot I listened out for more voices. There was a few here and there but not as much as there had been. I turned back to stare at my house on the corner of the street. Was Mum drinking again? Was Luke there, or was he working?

I shook my head, “Tonight’s for lollies nothing else”. I crashed into something hard, groaning I fell on to the hard floor, my pumpkin lantern skimming away from me.

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Lexie "Lex"

"Ow," I whined, as my head collied with something hard. My bag dropped to the ground, along with my body.
" Ouch," someone else said. I hadn't realized I bumped into a person. I stood up quickly and dusted off my coustume.
" I'm so sorry," I trilled. I offered a hand to her and she quickly stood.
" It's okay," glancing behind me, her face contorted. " Who are they?" I looked behind me and mentally slapped myself for forgetting.
" Rowan and Jake. I had to force them to come with me. You see, I don't like being alone, especially at night. By the way, i'm Lexie."
" Chrissy," she replied. " Sorry I bumped into you." I laughed and continued walking.
" Not your fault," Blaire hissed," if miss fairy queen over there wouldn't have been rushing to The Manor, we wouldn't have had this problem." I stuck my tounge out at her and continued forward.
" The Manor," Chrissy stuttered. " You can't mean the Vactian's Manor."
" Yeah," Jake said silently, sounding a bit bored. " The Vactian's Manor." He made a few downwind ghost noises and I gave him a pointed look.
" Well," I said, nudging her in the arm," wanna come?"
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Blaire Rowan:

I yawned, bored. Jake was making ghost noises again, while Lexie helped up the girl she'd walked into.

"Oi, when do we move?" I asked, pushing Jake away from me when he got too close.

Lexie turned towards me, pulling the girl-Chrissy, I think her name was-around with her.

"Right now," Lexie said, grinning. "Just as soon as Chrissy here makes up her mind."

I shrugged and pulled my hood up, ignoring the glares from Mr. Marine nearby. Jake was adjusting his helmet now. I snickered and turned away so they couldn't see my face.

There it was, at the far end of the street. Vatican's Manor. Just waiting for us, the place we were going to spend the night in.

"Well," I said, turning back to Jake, Lexie and Chrissy. "What are we waiting for? Let's go!" I looked around and frowned. "Hang on a second. Where'd Mr. Fangs go?"
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Ben:

Ben stood up from the park bench he was perched. He hadn't particpated in the halloween
night of getting candy and black mailing people into thinking that you'll trick them if they don't
hand it over.

Ben shook his head he never liked that stuff. Digging his fingers into his pants he began to walk
towards Blaire, Jake and Lexie, the people he had been walking around with the whole night.
They wanted, no planned to go into Vatican's Manor to get the other kids lollies from their
fingers.

"There you are!" Lexie beemed a smile breaking across her face. Ben turned to see another girl
standing next to them.
"Alright, I'll go with you then" She nodded patting the pumpkin lantern.
"Great!" Lexie said turning towards the end of the road where the manor stood. It look horrific,
"Are you guys sure you want to go in there?" Ben asked nervously scratching his arm.
"I don't see why not" Blaire muttered shrugging her shoulders. Jake blinked before pointing
down the streets.

"Do we have to go to those kids to start this bet thing?" He asked. Ben looked down the road
to see three though look teenagers standing a few metres away from the Manor. A few daring
little children in famcy costumes stood next to them waging their lolly baskets.

"Yep!" Lexie cried jumping into a fast walk, "We have to go to those goons and get out
bet!"




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Lexie-

I started towards the group of guys, pushing my way through a few small children.
" Hey," one of them said," how can we help you today?"
" I'm just going to cut to the chase, I bet you all 60 dollars each that we can stay in the Manor all night." All three of the guys discussed something in a circle.
" 60 dollars each is a lot of money. How about raising the stakes? Two nights." I rolled my eyes.
" We have famalies, smart one. One night, take it or lose it."
" Fine," another one said," but everyone," he said, eyeing Chrissy," has to stay in, or no deal."
" Got it," I said while turning towards the manor," okay guys, you all ready for this?" Rowan shrugged, the guys just grunted, and Chrissy whimpered. " Great!" I took off for the gate.
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Jake

Well, this was just getting better and better. I hadn't originally wanted to go along, but Rowan had convinced me to join her, and as she was just about my only friend, I had agreed. I hadn't seriously thought that they were going to go in; I figured once the girls caught sight of the spooky old place, they'd freak, giving us a good excuse to go somewhere else.

Not that I was scared of the house, mind you. I could take it any day. But I was pretty sure that weird stuff went on in there, supernatural or not. Like the time the neighbor's cat, Ruffles, had somehow gotten locked into the manor - two days after the meowings were finally heard and a rescue team barged in, the cat was found dead. No, worse than dead - ripped apart. It was pretty disgusting, and had been the talk of the neighborhood for ages. Ever since that time, people had stayed far away from the place.

Somehow, though, we had gotten into this mess of staying the entire night there. I hid my unease by joking around and plotting how I would scare the others in the manor. Rowan, of course, never scared easily, but I figured Lexie and maybe this new girl Chrissy would be a couple of good screamers. All it would take was a white sheet, some creaky stairs, and bam! I'd be sure to have a great prank. I smiled in anticipation as Lexie thrashed out the details of the dare with the guys who had started it.

"Okay guys," she said as we walked towards the manor, "you all ready for this?"

"Sure," I said with a shrug.

She raced off to the gate, skipping and looking for all the world like a little black fairy. I elbowed Rowan. "What do you think? She going to last the night?"

Rowan gave me a withering look. "Does it matter?"

I shrugged again good-naturedly. "Hey Ben," I called to the other guy in the group, "have you ever been in the manor?"

He shook his head, a little sadly. Well, this wasn't exactly the most talkative bunch, but whatever. I was here for the sole purpose of hanging with my friend; there was also the added bonus of being able to say I spent the night in the creepiest place in town.

We reached the gates, and Lexie slowly pushed the gate open, making it creak. We all stood in front of the open gates, staring up at the manor before us. Seeing as no one was making a move, I stepped forward.

"What are we waiting for?" I asked, and waltzed through, leading the way. As I walked along the broken stone path, I couldn't help but notice something move at the side of the manor.

What the heck was that? Eh. Probably another cat.

We came to the steps of the porch, and I led the group up, going slowly to make sure no rotting boards would give way beneath my feet. Once we reached the door, I twisted the doorknob and it opened, swinging in with surprisingly no noise. That was even creepier than if it had squeaked. I glanced back at the others behind me.

"In we go!" I said, shouldering my fake machine gun with a cocky grin and eliciting a nervous giggle from Chrissy. Then we all stepped into the manor.

The door slammed shut behind us.
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