A Poem A Day...

This is not really something I worked on for a long time. Just something for pleasure




A poem a day
keeps the sadness away.
My daily prescription
is just say what you have to say

A poem a day
makes everything okay.
It can turn an aggravated groan
into a cheerful hooray!

A poem a day
keeps the sadness away
that's my motto
It's actually good, so hey
if you steal it you're dead!!

Thanks for reading fellow writers!

P.S. You don't really have to review it...but you can tell me if you liked it

Hey Princess! I really liked this. It was catchy and original, a breath of fresh air from the other poems that I've been critiquing recently. However, I just wanted to make one comment on your ending and the little note after it:

yuprincess wrote:if you steal it you're gay!!

P.P.S. When I said gay I meant "happy" Seriously.

Two things. First, 'happy' would not at all make sense in the context of the last line of your poem. Secondly, if you're telling the truth, why didn't you use happy? Whatever the case, 'Gay' doesn't really seem like a very good choice of words. Maybe, 'If you steal it, you're dead' or something to that effect would be better.

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Otherwise, it was nice, and you have talent. Keep it up!

-Elinor

Sorry...I wanted a nice rhyme! I changed it though!

I loved it I didn't like it. I write my best poems at night. That's the praise but the review is that it should be revised and super sized. Your should magnify the length of this poem. other than that I like it.

Hey this was really cute and fun! I liked it Thanks for posting!
Peace,
SnickerDooly