The Steven Poem

I hate Steve.
He is my pet peeve
I'll strangle him with a sleeve
Oh boy,~I hate Steve

Oh Steven
Oh Sort of Steven
You are a bleeding
¡Fúck!

Oh Yes Sir!
Your worse than
the Primeministcaa
When it was Blaire.

Oh Steven
Oh Sort of Steven
You are a bleeding
¡Fúck!

You need to be chopped
into little pieces
cause you were mean to our Grace
and thats not on! DICKWOD!

Oh Steven
Oh Sort of Steven
You are a bleeding
¡Fúck!

Grace is gonna have s.e.x. with a well fit guy
and you will be so jealous
but we don't care
you live in a pig sty

Oh Steven
Oh Sort of Steven
You are a bleeding
¡Fúck!

I cannot express how spotty you are
You have more craters than the moon
But the moon is nice and shiny + cool
and your a fúckwit! you goo!

Hi Unknown! You should know that in order to get more people to review your work, you should do some reviewing yourself. It's just an easy way to get people to notice and care more.

This should be rated. I'm thinking it should be at least 16+, maybe even 18+ for the language.

This seems more like a rant than a poem. Maybe it was written when you were very emotional and that's fine in my opinion, but you have to remember that when you post it here, you are posting it for other people to read. Just remember to make it interesting and try to make the reader feel something when they read it.

Good luck in your writing!

-Brainy

Thank you for your pleasant commentary. I am struggling to discover this rating conundrum. Advice would be appreciated please . I will also take your council in commencing to review others work.
Merci Beaucoup

Hey UnknownPoet!

As far as hate poetry goes, this is pretty lame! In fact, it seems rather comedic all in all, in a very crass way of course. If you wanted to make this serious, stop with the repetition and the silly juvenile slurs. If you wanted to make this more comedic, then try explaining why exactly Steve is so hated. Right now, it seems really random and kind of pointless.

I'm almost certain that I'll get hate mail for this...

I actually really like this. Poetry is different for each person and it's obvious by this piece that you were pretty annoyed while writing it. It reminds me of a mature, angry sort of Dr. Seuss poetry. Good job on this, regardless of varying opinions.

While it isn't exactly quality,it is rather...interesting.I can't say I liked it--not my style. But it surprised me. Kudos for how surprising it is. I can appreciate anything that makes me start a little, and the switch from childish rhyming poetry to spitting venom did that rather nicely. However, the style does need a little work certainly. It could use a little more consistencey and expansion of the topic.