Just Another Day

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I would like to save a spot for a girl! Profile will be filled in later.

*Skins, being that your guy happens to resemble a certain Dougie Poynter ;) I think my character may very well end up falling for yours, even though he's gay. Might add to the drama. Is that alright?*


Name: Alison Jakobs

Gender: Female

Age: 16

Grade: 11, Junior

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Personality: Extremely smart, intensely focused on her studies, something of a know-it-all nerd. She doesn't have a lot of friends because she's too busy with schoolwork and her job; she's an extreme perfectionist, too. Generally, she's oblivious to what other people say about her and has a cheerful disposition.

Courses: (hoping I did this correctly!)
ENG403: British and World Literature
HST103: World History
HST020: Psychology*
WLG210: French II
MTH303: Algebra II
SCI203: Biology
SCI303: Chemistry
TCH030: Digital Photography and Graphics*

Likes: Books, science, math, getting straight A's

Dislikes: Extremely loud headbanger music, rowdiness, slackers, rulebreaking

Favorites:
Movies: anything documentary
Music: alternative/pop (All-American Rejects is her favorite band)
Books: classics, especially Jane Austen's works
Color: red

Job: Cashier at Foot-and-Hands Sports Shop

Talents: Excels at schoolwork and computers

History: Grew up in the same old town for all her life until moving last year to Texas. This is her first year at Blue Star High. Has a mom, dad, and a little sister who's 12; average family life.

Up for Love: Yes

Other: She's vegetarian. She also wants to be something in the science realm; not sure what yet.
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Name: Mina Trapper

Gender: Female

Age: (13-18) 16

Grade: Sophomore

Picture: http://kbauer.deviantart.com/art/pretty-girl-93851184

Personality: She's bubbly, sweet, and honest. She has many admirers, but she's has no idea:). She's pretty popular and she gets straight As. She wants to be a photographer or an artist, but she dabbles in writing as well. She hates snobby people and loves the spotlight.

Courses: (7-10)

TCH030: Digital Photography and Graphics
MTH403: Pre-Calculus/Trigonometry
ENG104: Honors Literary Analysis and Composition I
ART010: Fine Art
ENG010: Journalism
SCI500: AP® Biology
HST020: Psychology*
HST212: Geography and World Cultures*

Likes: photography, listening to music, hanging out with friends, painting, drawing, sleeping in, riding her horses

Dislikes: olives, annoying snobs, being wrong, inside secrets, stupidity

Favorites:
Color- Purple
Animal- Tiger
Sport- Hockey
Subject- English
Season- Autumn
Scent- Any kind of citrus

Job: (optional) Babysits and works at a coffee shop in the mornings on weekends.

Talents: She has a beautiful singing voice and she likes field hockey.

History: She's lives with her mom and visits her dad every weekend. Her four year old little sister lives with her and her mom while her nine year old brother and twelve year old sister live with her dad.

Up for Love: yes (while guys like her, she's never had a boyfriend)

Other: owns two horses named Peebody and Sarge
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Okay, everyone here is invited to the party....

Alexis Carson- 11th

Today, September 5, is my birthday. It is a pretty Saturday morning, and I am setting up for an awesome party. All my Sophomore and Junior friends are going to be there! My Junior friends are going to give me grief for inviting Sophes (Sophmores), but I don't care, they are my friends.

The theme is a Red Carpet Affair. Everyone gets to dress up and arrive in fancy cars. I actually have a red carpet leading up to my house and I had a few of Aunt Carols friends come over with camera's. Then we are going to see a movie a few of my Drama friends put together. I got to be in it, of course.

I play Cecilia, the lovesick teen who can't decide between two insanely hot guys who both dump me in the end. Then I end up with the best friend who was there all along. Yeah, it is cheesy, but it is funny. I so overact it is sort of ridiculous.

Danielle gets to plat the super hot girl that all the guys want but she is a total jerk. She wanted to play that, not my idea. It added to the movie, though.

Jordan and Ollie got to play the hot guys, and Peter played the best friend.

After that there will be a dance. And I am going to make an idiot out of myself because my dancing skills are pretty pathetic. I proably will just hog the karyoke microphone, and sing while everyone else dances, unless I get a good dance partner.

I have my Aunt's movie theater all set up, with someone running the popcorn stand and everything. This is going to be the best night of my life. I am turning 17. No doubt my Aunt is going to get me a car.

The decorations are mostly red and orange, my favorite colors. The danceroom has been set up to look like a club, with a bar and everything. A soda bar, of course. No achlohol here. The middle of the huge room is a wodden floor, and around the romm on ceramic tiles are bar stolls and tables.

I run to get changed into a green, black and red dress. I also toss on a pair of green shoes and straiten my hair. I hear a limo pull up. The most awesome party ever has just begun.

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Danielle

I rummage frantically through my closet, looking for my blue and black dress. I find it! I throw it on. My hair has already been done at thesalon, as well as my nails, face and skin. I look in the mirror and push a stray lock of hair out of my face. I grin at my aperance. I look hot. I quickly toss on my blue heels. I do a little dance step infront of the mirror, pose, then do a quick vocal warm up. Alexi said there would be karyoke!

The limo pulls up infront of my house. I give my mom a quick kiss, then get in. Before long the limo pulls up infront of Alexis well-off Aunt and Uncle's house.

I step out. a few camera's flash. I smile, wave, blow kisses. alexis comes up to me.

"How am I for time?" I ask her.

"You're the first one here." She says. I eye her ugly green and red dress. Well, one anyone else it would have looked awful. It looked charming on her.

"Excellent!" I say. I blow another quick kiss to the cameras, then walk inside with Alexis. She imediatley goes back outside. I hear another car arive.

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Lori

I look at myself in the mirror, plucking one last hair from my left eyebrow. I kiss my ring on my finger and stare back again at myself in the mirror. “Dad, do I look beautiful?” I can almost hear him reply in his deep gentle voice a reassuring yes. My green dress looks slightly simple, but its still a nice one that cost my mom quite a bit of money. My dad was a simple man, I’m a simple girl, and I wouldn’t have it any other way.

“Your ride is here!” my mom calls from downstairs. I rush down the stairs and give my mom a peck on the cheek before I go out the door. I climb into the luxurious red Corvette and before I know it I’m at Alexis’s house.

I walk up the red carpet, I see Danielle and Alexis both waiting for me. “Hey!” I say and embrace them both. “This is going to be really fun Alexis.”

“Yeah it should be, come on, let’s go inside.” Alexis leads me inside and I gaze in awe at all the decorations. This should be an amazing night indeed.


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Sorrow lasts through this night
I'll take this piece of you,
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For just one second I felt whole... as you flew right through me.


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Lydia and Lance~

Lydia:

I buttoned up the front of my black and purple Lolita style dress. It had a sort of gothic tutu skirt and a corset top. Spinning around once I turned to Lance sitting on the bed.
" How do I look bro?" He gave me a once over and smiled.
" Amazing," adjusting his tie he stood up and ran a hand through his hair. " And me?"
" Superb," I threw a black and purple bow in my hair and bolted for the door, only to run back in and grab my keys and my brother. " This is going to be so much fun," I squealed as I called shot-gun to the shiny black volvo.
" Sure," he mumbled.
Lance:
We pulled up to Alexis house, as soon as the car stopped Lydia ran out and gave her, and the other girls around her, a hug. Sighing, I walked out and gave each of them a breif, one-armed, hug.
" Lydia, Lance," Alexis started," glad you two could come!"
" Wouldn't miss it," Lydia squealed.
" Yeah, what she said," I mumbled, flipping hair out of my face. The other girls, Danielle and Lori, engulfed us with small talk and compliments. Yeah, this was going to be a long night.
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Peter


"Stupid bow," I growl as I wrestled with the bow tie around my neck. Sadly I was losing.
"So where are you going so spruced up?" My little sister, Jordan appeared behind me.
"Today is Alexis birthday ,"I swirled around to face her and pointed to the dreaded thing around me neck for help.Giggling she made her way over to me and happily obliged.
"What time you coming home?" She raised a brow , tugging gently at the bow to make sure it was secure."Perfect," she mused.
I turn back around to take another look in the mirror for another overview, I was wearing pure Armani a."Don't know,"I shrugged."Probably around---" I'm cut short by the incisive beeping. "Hello," I answer my blackberry.
"Where are you Pete?"Alexis replies over the phone.
"On my way,"I answer before ending the call.I turn back around grabbing my jacket off my bed and giving Jordan a kiss on the cheek, "later," before I head out the door.As soo as reach the pavement I make my way to my jet black Mercedes and slide into the front seat,insert the key and ignite the engine before pulling into the street.
Minutes later I'm in front of Alexis' house.As soon as I emit from my car and strut down the plush red carpet I'm soon welcomed and hugged by Alexis,Daniel,Lydia and Lori."Ready for the best night of your teenage life!"Alexis squeal.
"Of course," I smirk.
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"Their ideology is that human nature is fundamentally evil.In other words, humans are evil from the day they are born."

"Human is beatiful. Perfect is boring."




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So... in Calculus, Alexis was passing out birthday invitations. She saw me staring at them, and gave me one. I felt like it was out of pity. I mean, she isn't one of the girls that ditched me, but... she is just so happy all the time. No one is always happy... so she's a liar.

My mother was so excited when I showed her the invite. She jumped up and down and told me how happy she was that I was getting real friends. So she went out and bought me this black dress... I don't like it, but if she says it's cute, well... let's just say she has more style than me.

My mother drives me to Alexis' house, and I already see people lining up, getting their pictures taken. Most of the girls have friends or a guy with them. But I'm all alone.

"Come home... whenever!" mother says in a chirpy voice.

"Can't you give me an 8 o-clock curfew or something? So I have an excuse to leave? Like anyone'll talk to me..." I stared out the window again. No one even notices I'm about to enter.

"No... be nice, be happy. Bye!"

She literally pushes me out of the car. And now people are staring.


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Alison

Surprise wouldn't even begin to describe my feeling at finding that I was invited to Alexis Carson's birthday party.

Being the new kid who had only been attending the high school for the past week, I really didn't know anyone; Alexis was the one person I had officially met, in the halls, when asking her where I could find the science lab for my Biology class. She had pointed out the way and then welcomed me to Blue Star High. Ever since then, we had waved at each other when passing through the hallways. And now, she had invited me to her party.

I had considered skipping it; I was never thoroughly comfortable at parties, and anyways, it seemed like a waste of good, solid studying time. But my mom encouraged me to go, saying that it was the perfect opportunity to make friends.

So I was left scrambling to find a suitable outfit to wear for the party; rummaging through my closet, I came upon a red dress that came to my knees with a black sash. Slipping it on, I grabbed some shoes, tied my hair in a bun, and dashed out the door to my dad's car. For the occasion (Red Carpet event or something like that), my parents had rented a very flashy silver Volvo, so I would arrive in style and not appear as the laughingstock of the century in our muddy, soccer-mom-van.

As we pulled up at the house, I saw that a group was standing and waiting at the end of the carpet. I got out and walked awkwardly across the expansive red path, aware of the stares of the others, no doubt wondering who the heck I was.

Alexis, though, gave me a cheery, "Hey Alison!" and a hug, which I returned. I positioned myself at the edge of the group and watched in anxious silence as more people arrived.

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Name: Ariana Jackson

Gender: Female

Age: (13-18) 17

Grade: Junior

Picture: (later)

Personality: Depends on her mood and who you are to her. If your a friend, she's the most genorous, sweet, bubbly and all around fun person to be around. If your not a friend, she'll lie, make rumors that are less than flattering, steal away any boy who you have your eye on just because she can and just be an all around b****. Kind of like Regina Williams. She also likes to lead boys on and flirt a lot. She's also REALLY smart, her IQ is 187. She's really smart :D

Courses: (7-10)
ENG510: AP® English Literature and Composition
HST412: U.S. and Global Economics*
WLG510: AP® French Language
MTH302: Algebra II
SCI303: Chemistry
ENG010: Journalism
TCH040: Web Design*
BUS020: Business and Personal Relationships*
(Aww..no Bioethics?)




Likes:
Hanging out with friends
Flirting/leading boys on
Playing Tennis
Shopping

Dislikes:
People that she dislikes
Her ex-boyfriends (Almost all of whom she dumped)
This weird girl who stares at her all the time

Favorites:
Same as likes :D

Job: (optional)
At Danny Days Ice Cream Parlor:
Waiter/Waitress

Talents:
Tennis
Writing
Cheerleading
Basketball (but she doesn't like it much)

History: Fairly boring. Grew up in NY but moved to Texas two years before, in freshman year. Does not have the Texas accent so many people made fun of her for a while but then she became popular and everyone loves her. Lives with her dad. Her mom died when she was born so she's an only child. Her father is enganged to a woman named Alexa. Ariana doesn't like her much because she tries to act as her mother and Alexa actually asked her to call her mom...so yeah..awkward.

Up for Love: YESSSSS but be warned, she leads boys on! Of course anyone attracted to her wouldn't care because well....she's her.

Other: Has bulimia. NOBODY knows. It isn't serious though.
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or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

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Ariana

"Dad! I'm going to Alexis' party! See you later!" I yelled to my father. He was in the kitchen, no doubt frosting cakes for his catering company.

"Be back by 12," he yelled back.

"1?"

"Fine, no later though,"

I walked through the door and went to my black porsche. Soon I was at Alexis' house.

"OMG! I love your dress!" some girl called.

"Thanks!" I said back with a smile. I saw Alexis out talking on her phone and strode over to her.

"Yeah mom. No drugs, no alcohol, boys have to be out by 11. Ok. Love you too. Bye"

"Hey. Boys out by 11?", I asked.

"Ha. That's funny"

"Where are the boys, anyway?", I say turning around looking at the guests still arriving.
A red Mercedes rolled by, before beeping at the crowd. Here they come.
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
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that's just a bit too sweet.

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Sorry if I don't post anything the same time as everyone else. I'm aware that most of you, if not all, live in America. Because of this, I would have to post at something ike 4am to be able post at the same time as you! Wow, that sounded confusing... you get the idea though? :lol: Also, my school life will effect my posting. Stupid school ¬_¬

Ollie

Should I risk it?, I thought carefully to myself. I was considering taking alcohol to Alexis's party. Surely, there wouldn't be anyone checking bags or anything, would there? I didn't even know why I was invited to her party in the first place. I hardly knew the chick. I talked to her and everything, but we weren't, like, best friends or anything. I didn't really care though. If there was a party, I was going! Grabbing the packet of beer, I left my room and headed into the kitchen.

My dad and sister were sitting at the kitchen table. My dad looked at me in disgust when I walked in, like he always did when he saw me.

"Where are you goin' then?" He asked, clearly not interested.

"Uh, a party." I replied.

"Good for you," He said sarcastically. "Just don't expect to pull any girls." He laughed.

"He doesn't need to worry about that," My sister began. "He's more interested in pulling boys."

"No I'm not!" I said, a little too hastily.

While my father and sister continued laughing, I quickly left the house. I slammed the door behind me, as I ran up the driveway.

I'd gotten a lift from my neighbour, Jason, who owned a red Mercedes. I knew that I'd look a lot better turning up in that, than turning up in my father's car which looked more like a shed with wheels. Jason smiled at me as I entered the car. It was a twenty minute drive from my house to where Alexis's party was. She lived in the rich area of town. Grabbing my shoulder bag, I stepped out of the car. Sheesh... This is fancy, I thought as I looked at the scene before me.

I was wearing some kind of monkey suit. I probably looked a mess, but oh well. I just cared about having a good time. As I neared Alexis and the rest of her mates, I couldn't help but notice a boy standing in the group. He was pretty darn nice. Shaking the thought out of my head, I jogged up to them.

"Wassup people?" I said, grinning.

"Hey!" Alexis seemed pretty happy to see me.

"This is goin' to be well good!" I answered, opening my bag.

Making sure that there weren't any adults looking, I pulled the beer out of my bag.

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Lydia and Lance:

Lydia:
Ollie slipped a pack of beer out of his bag and I immediatly grabbed Lance's hands.
" Don't even dream about it," I hissed at him. He just moved my hands out of the way and grabbed a bottle.
" Loosen up, Lydia," he laughed," don't be so square." I watched in disgust as he chugged down a huge gulp of beer. Alexis hit me in the arm and took a bottle.
" You can smoke but you can't drink," she scoffed while struggling with the bottle cap," how twisted is that?" Sticking my tounge out at her, I turned to look down the red carpet.
Lance:
I took Alexis's bottle from her and quickly popped the cap before handing it back.
" Oh, thanks," she whispered before taking a gulp. I just grunted and turned to Ollie.
" How'd you get the guts to bring beer to the party," I pressed. " I would have brought it myself, but miss fun patrol over there wouldn't let me." I felt a sharp pain in my arm but decided to ignore it.
" It was no big deal," he stammered. " Dad didn't care anyway."
" Well, anyhow, its-"
" Oh. My. Gawd," Lori screamed running inside. What now?
" Look at that," some other chick gawked, Ariana was her name. I think. I nerely spilled my drink as Lydia jerked me inside.
" Lydia! What the-" I stopped in mid sentence and stared wide eyed at the giant thing in front of me.
" Man," Ollie whispered," that's one big birtday cake." I could only nod in agreement.
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Alison

So there I was, standing at the edge of the crowd and not really listening to the bantering of the classmates, when the most amazing thing happened; I swear, it was like one of those ridiculous chick flicks.

This red car pulled up, and the door opened, and he stepped out. He was gorgeous, simply put. I'm pretty sure I was gaping at him as he jogged over to us, a bag in his hands.

"Wassup people?" he asked, smiling at everyone. He didn't even notice me, standing at the back as I was.

As the other kids talked to him, I strained to catch his name. Ollie.

Well. It wasn't exactly the hottest name ever, but my word, his face sure made up for it.

My heart was beating and I was wondering whether it'd be completely awkward if I went up to him and introduced myself, when he pulled the contents of his bag out and I gasped: it was beer! This wasn't supposed to be a drinking party! Suddenly, a very tiny bit of the glowing aura around Ollie faded - but it was a very small part.

Teens do this kind of stuff, I told myself. You're just not used to it because you're never at parties like this; you've always got your nose in a book instead.

Suddenly, a few of the kids were rushing inside and exclaiming at something, which I deduced from the cries to be a large birthday cake. I followed, and found myself staring at a colossal, tiered chocolate wonder.

"Whoa," I muttered.

Alexis was talking; I heard her saying to someone else, "We're going to start the games soon, almost everyone's here."

Well, let the fun begin, I thought.
There are two kinds of folks who sit around thinking about how to kill people:
psychopaths and mystery writers.

I'm the kind that pays better.
~Rick Castle



Injustice anywhere is a threat to justice everywhere.
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