ERIZABESU~ Manga character

This is my manga, and the writing says 'Elizabeth'... which is my name... I made this character up so... please review on it.

Hi again Carly!

This was a nice drawing-the girl is really pretty. I love the wide eyes and hair and the way you drew her-these seems like your likeness of a manga character already in existence, not like something you made up, and I salute you for that. I'm also glad to see that you've re-sized this.

Now, I have a few comments. First, what is that black thing on the side of the picture? It would be better cropped out as it's distracting and contributes nothing to the picture. Secondly, the text-I like how it spells your name-seems a bit out of place, like it's just there and not really apart of the photo. Maybe you could try a transparent background for the text?

Anyway, it was good! PM me if you have any questions.

-Elinor

ok and that BLACK thing is her tail lol. she's supposed to have a cat like look, the ears, the long nails, the tail. thanks for your comment, and i know the writing looks out of place but it's the best i could get it lol.

It's great! SO cute! ^_^

Hey Carly!

Ah, Katakana! I can read it! Yay!

Anyway, onto the picture, a very good job.
I'm guessing what Ellie meant is that black thing on the far right which needs to be cropped. And, yes; transparent background for the text would help.

Her's a little something I noticed. Her shoulders and chest have a definitive width and
curve, however, as it moves down, it slims down a bit too much, even for manga.
Also; the tail end, could have a few more strokes showing the hairy-ness of it.

Anyway, good work. Keep drawing.
Cheers,
~Lava

Yes, i'll brush up on those later. thanks for you suggestions!