I think the choice to show it and black and white is the best thing ever, the angle of the frame is excellent and the pose of the girl (might be you?) rounds it off adorably. I would suggest cropping off some of the top of the picture though because it feels like there's a bit of excess expanse.
Hi there! I agree with Ben about cropping a bit of the excess out of this picture, but otherwise, it's really nice. The black and white compliments the photo perfectly, and the girl [is that you?] is really pretty. When she holds the frame up to her face, it looks so authentic and cool.
Overall, you're a very nice photographer and I can't wait to see more of your work!
-Elinor
P.S. I see this one is re-sized, nice job on that. But looking at your previous works, I see that they aren't. Just keep up the good habit!
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Hi. now that you have resized the picture, i think I will be able to comment. The hairstyle is awesome. I wish I also had same type of hair. The angle, idea, concept, color is mind-blowing.I think you should post it on Google Images.
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