Well, I'm not going to edit this drawing, because I don't have it anymore. I gave it away. xD But I want to now what you think of it. Thanks. And I think you can see a little reflection... Don't care about that, eh? I drew it yesterday, actually.
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May all your dreams come true.. (even the ones they laughed at).
Awww it's sweet! I do have some advice though. I think the girl is a giraffe XD The neck seems too long, you should have some of her shoulder in the picture. Also, the chin can't stretch quite so far. Maybe ask someone to pose for you next time? That's a really easy way to get the body proportions right.
I love how you've done the guy's hair, both sets of lips and noses are good, the girl's hair is pretty and the hand is a little flat/ stiff looking but not bad.
It's hard to comment on shading as the picture isn't very clear but I would suggest that you need more. Maybe do some shadowing on the faces and such.
This was an alright drawing. I agree with what Kitty said about the girl's neck being too long, but her hair kind of seems messed up. Why are there two random strands coming out from her neck? Also, her cheeks look really bloated. I like the shading in the picture, and the guy's hair is really nice.
Keep it up, and do PM me if you post anything new.
-Elinor
All our dreams can come true — if we have the courage to pursue them. -- Walt Disney
I disagree about the neck...I think anatomically speaking and from the angle we (as viewers) are at, it's just fine.
Her hand, though, looks a little awkward to me, because I can't quite figure out how it is positioned. Next time (and I hope there is a next time, because this is very pretty!), I would suggest that you spend a little time working on the anatomical structure of her fingers. Check out your own hand in a mirror if that helps.
Also, I would recommend a little shadowing under the hand (depending on where your light source is coming from) to place it more effectively "in" the picture. Right now it almost looks like two interposed images.
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I like this...a lot! I think the hair of both, the boy and the girl, look good. I am not saying this as a drawer. I wish I could draw, but sadly I wasn't blessed with the talent you have. But, the hand bothers me the most out of everything that could use some work in this picture (which isn't really a lot). The first thing I thought about after seeing your drawing was, " Awww. Wait, what is wrong with her hand?"I sat there trying to figure out what was bothering me so bad about the picture, and it suddenly came to me. I think the fingers are too long and the way you drew the hand bending is a little unnatural. Next time, get somebody to lay their hand on their neck or side of their face to get the hand to look more... well... natural. Hope I helped.
-Morgan(:
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Nice job. I love the girl's hair, and you did a good job with the kiss itself. I like how you made especially strong lines on the lips so your eyes are drawn to them. I only have two corrections:
1.Like Morgan just said, the hands are a tad bit strange; I'm specifically talking about the girl's fingers. The shape of her fingers are not natural. The shape of her fingers are too...wavish shaped. (haha, how else can I describe them?)
2. Stronger lines, please! (: Especially on the girl's chin area the lines are very weak, and the guy's neck.
I don`t care what any one says, the girl looks good to me. Then again, I can only draw stick people. 
