Reviews by Nephthys - Scripts and More (Open)

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Nephthys
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Sat Mar 13, 2010 9:22 pm
Nephthys says... · Sat Mar 13, 2010 9:22 pm
If I think that your piece needs some work, I won't be afraid to let you know. I can be a little harsh, but what do I know anyway? :) Usually I can get back to you in 24 hours unless I'm really busy, in which case I'll be sure to inform you about the delay.

If you'd like me to review your story, please post a link.

I Specialize in Scripts
- Stage Scripts
- TV Scripts
- Film Scripts

I Also Like to Review
- Fantasy
- Science Fiction
- Other Fiction

I Will Review
- Historical Fiction
- Action/Adventure Fiction
- Romantic Fiction (No 18+ stories)

I Will Not Review
- Art
- Poetry
- Lyrics
- Novels
Last edited by Nephthys on Sun Mar 06, 2011 3:50 am, edited 4 times in total.
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bubblegum
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Sat Mar 13, 2010 9:27 pm
bubblegum says... · Sat Mar 13, 2010 9:27 pm
You want to review my prologue? It's not more than 200 words or so, and it's fantasy fiction. xD

Link: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic60030.html
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Nephthys
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Sat Mar 13, 2010 9:56 pm
Nephthys says... · Sat Mar 13, 2010 9:56 pm
Done :)
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bubblegum
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Sun Mar 14, 2010 1:08 pm
bubblegum says... · Sun Mar 14, 2010 1:08 pm
Well, I've submit more. Take a look? : )
Link: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic60214.html
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Nephthys
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Sun Mar 14, 2010 4:54 pm
Nephthys says... · Sun Mar 14, 2010 4:54 pm
Done :)

Let me know if I need to clarify anything.
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BenFranks
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Sun Mar 14, 2010 6:17 pm
BenFranks says... · Sun Mar 14, 2010 6:17 pm
Hey!

Erm, you said you don't review anything 18+, but I'm desperate for reviews on my historical fiction new chapter if you're interested, it's only got strong language. I don't mind if you pass! :D

topic60175.html

Thanks anyway,
Ben




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Nephthys
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Sun Mar 14, 2010 10:08 pm
Nephthys says... · Sun Mar 14, 2010 10:08 pm
Done :)

Currently Working On:

Nothing :'(
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Dragonet
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Mon Mar 15, 2010 1:31 am
Dragonet says... · Mon Mar 15, 2010 1:31 am
Hey there. Could you review my story 'Forbidden to love'. Warning: it's very long

thanx!
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Nephthys
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Mon Mar 15, 2010 6:09 pm
Nephthys says... · Mon Mar 15, 2010 6:09 pm
Oh my goodness that took a while :)

Done!

Currently Working On:

Nothing :'(
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MiaParamore
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Mon Mar 15, 2010 6:32 pm
MiaParamore says... · Mon Mar 15, 2010 6:32 pm
Can you review this for me: Seems like Eternity in Historical Fiction. it's recent so you will find it easily.
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Eliza:)
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Mon Mar 15, 2010 7:01 pm
Eliza:) says... · Mon Mar 15, 2010 7:01 pm
Could you review German Jew? Thank you.

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Nephthys
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Tue Mar 16, 2010 3:51 pm
Nephthys says... · Tue Mar 16, 2010 3:51 pm
I'm finished Seems Like Eternity.


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German Jew - Eliza:)
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eldEr
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Fri Mar 26, 2010 5:49 pm
eldEr says... · Fri Mar 26, 2010 5:49 pm
I really need somebody to review at leaste chapter 2 for my novel.
Chapter 3 was finished shortly after, so I posted them in the same topic. The 3rd chapter is in the spoiler, but you don't have to review it if you're too busy.
It's Fantasy Fiction and I'm hoping somewhat good... :lol:
Thanks a million!

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Amnien
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Sat Mar 27, 2010 2:32 am
Amnien says... · Sat Mar 27, 2010 2:32 am
Would you be awesome and review the first and second chapters to my story?

It was originally going to be a short story but the plot is starting to unfold at a rapid pace and it might turn into a novel!

First Chapter: topic60718.html

Second Chapter: topic60794.html

Thanks!
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MiaParamore
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Tue Mar 30, 2010 3:18 pm
MiaParamore says... · Tue Mar 30, 2010 3:18 pm
I want a reply for my story:

A Criminal's Heart-Prologue
A Criminal's Heart Chapter-1(OLIVIA)
Chapter-2

I already have many reviews for my prologue but would like to have for chapter 1 and 2.
Thanks
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I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

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The bigger the issue, the smaller you write. Remember that. You don’t write about the horrors of war. No. You write about a kid’s burnt socks lying on the road. You pick the smallest manageable part of the big thing, and you work off the resonance.
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