Then we kissed and time stopped for a minute. (second draft)

Beautifully done my dear.

Its amazing and so beautiful and romantic. I hope your friend loves it, I don't see why they wouldn't!

I think her mouth is a tad bit too low. I think you could improve the wrist's perspective with a bit of shadowing. It's possible to bend it that way, but instead of just sidewards, add a little forward bend to it. I think you should also put a dip in her bridge, right about where her eyes are. This makes the profile look much better. Also, I think the tip of her nose should go down a bit. Perhaps this is the thing Kamas was mentioning. Also, clean it up a bit, but you already got that. Hmm... and oh yeah, the lines of his hand are a different pressure than the rest of the drawing. It makes it stand out more, and it just looks weird cause one of the fingers look too straight.


But all in all, LOVED it! If there was only a 'love' button, I would click it! I'm sure he would appreciate it a lot. You're really sweet, plus it's the thought the counts. You rock! haha

Wow, you're really good! : )
This won't be a long review, because I'm not the person who notice 'errors'..
But this drawing was absolutely great! And very cute. I think your friend will be very pleased. ^^

I like it. For a special someone, huh? Huh? Anyway, it's a very nice drawing. Unlike a few people who've commented before me, I think everything in this is (almost) perfect. Just a couple tips: their hands seem a little small for their body... But other than that, I understand this is an anime drawing, so you can get away with a few things. Love it! Can't wait to see the finished copy!