Hi everyone. So here's my next design. I didn't edit it but just posted it. I wanted to get more reviews. Next time designs will be better. And how can I add more than one picture in the same thread. They don't accept more than one. I left her face blank INTENTIONALY
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Hello, caboodleflowerpots here! Firstly, I've seen you other fashoin design and I thought it was absolutely lovely XD I like how you used just two colours, and of course the brown belt line. I like how it puffs out. I personely wouldn't want to wear it with the belt, but its all abnout what clothes suit different people. I am sure a good amount of people would lurve this, so carry on designing. PM me when you have some more Thankyou! ~caboodleandtheflowerpots
I want to love you but I better not touch I want to hold you but my senses tell me to stop I want to kiss you but I want it too much I want to taste you but your lips are venomous poison You're poison running through my veins You're poison, I don't want to break these chains Poison~Alice Cooper:D
Hey Shubhi, it's me again, here to critique your work. I don't have any suggestions, but I have to say I really liked the colors. They worked well together. And I liked the shape of the dress, especially the skirt! I love both of the creative dresses I have seen so far. You definitely have talent! Keep it up, and thanks for sharing your designs on YWS. I'll be looking forward to seeing more.
Well, on this, I'm not sure I like it so much. I mean it is good, but somehow, I think you need to take time doing this. What I'm trying to say is in the enlarged view it seems a bit messy (no, the design, but your outlining.) Besides that, good colour combination. Try to design the shoes as well, not just giving patches of color. The left shoulder strap is thicker than the right.
Keep it up! ~Lava
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YAY, you resized it. It looks way better. Anyway. again, LOVED IT ~caboodleandtheflowerpots
I want to love you but I better not touch I want to hold you but my senses tell me to stop I want to kiss you but I want it too much I want to taste you but your lips are venomous poison You're poison running through my veins You're poison, I don't want to break these chains Poison~Alice Cooper:D
Hi there! This was pretty good. I liked your first one a lot better, though. While the color scheme and style of the dress is nice on this one, it just seems a lot more sloppy. I can't even tell what the swirly things on the bodice are supposed to be. Is that lace? And she's not wearing high-heeled sneakers, is she? Otherwise, great drawing and I'd very much like to wear that dress.
-Elinor
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