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Misfit Circus: Now Before The End (2)

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Nick,

I step protectively in front of Amber.

"She's not going anywhere," I growl.

"Oh, and you think you're gonna stop us?" sneers a guard.

"Yeah, I do," I screw up my face thinking TELEPORT as hard as I can.

Of course, nothing happens. One of the guards grabs Amber and pushes me to the ground.

"Get out of it, lover boy," he sniggers maliciously.

When Daemyn comes up to make fun, I almost lose it. Luckily, I'm saved by Lurie, who comes up and vomits all over the ground it front of us. Daemyn leads her away, and I'm left alone, again. I put my head in my hands. What did they want Amber for? What are they doing to her? And why did they bring us here in the first place?

My thoughts are disturbed by the clanging of a gate opening. I look up, and see the person I least wanted to. Zeb.

"You little traitor," I growl, springing up.
Last edited by RedBird on Wed Apr 14, 2010 10:17 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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I thought Fee and Amber just got taken away, according to Shadow's post...?
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Yea, Reddy, you ignored the fact that Fee was stabbed with a needle and taken away (unconscious) after being tackled by two guards. =P And Amber got taken away, although I guess I could fix that, although it might take some brain power =P

Whaddya guys think? Oh, and o we have a DT? xD I don't even know
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I'm not sure, Shadow. I'll take a look. I'm pretty sure we do. o.O
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D: Sorry! I think we must have posted at the same time this morning...I'll change it.
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Nope, no DT. Only an old one from last year. And yeah, sometimes that happens--posting something at the same time.

And I could start a DT, if you like? Or someone else could...
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Oh, yes , please ^_^ Thanks! And thanks, Reddy ^_^
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Zack

I watched Fee and Amber get dragged off. Since It seemed to be the only thing happening, I wondered why.

They were both girls, but the other girls remained untouched, so that couldn't be the reason they were taken. Maybe the guards were just taking us to some test two at a time.

But wait...

Fee had been yelling at Daemyn, and Amber had been kissing Nick. They were both experiencing strong emotions the moment the guards took them away. I could guess that the guards were going to do something painful to us every time we showed any morale. Then they could control us easily.

But it was still just a thought. I had almost zero evidence. And now I was back to having nothing to do.
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Amber:

I was swiftly removed from the yard, struggling as my Fire tried harder to wake up. The guards dragged me down a long corridor. I tried to count the lights as they passed but lost count too soon.

Beside me, Fee was unconscious. The grip on my wrists tighten and I felt my flames leap higher. Ah, crap, I thought sourly. Not again.

"Let me go," I told them but the Guard slapped me, telling me to shut up. That was the wrong thing to do. The air around me started to shimmer. Oh, hell. "If you don't let go right now, I'm going to burst into flames on you!"

A second later and I was thrown into a small room. I hit the wall and fell down, disorientated. I watched the upside down scene of the door being slammed shut and just lay there, staring at it.

A few moments later and I was on fire....and then the darkness closed in. Flames licking at the walls was the last thing I saw.
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**FEE**

I woke up, my head throbbing and my mouth sour, looking around me. There was a man standing in a corner, watching me. When he saw I was awake, he left the room, and came back in almost right away. A speaker somewhere boomed, startling me.

"Good day, miss. As you are now aware, you are under our care. Now, this man right here will tell you what to do."

I looked around, and noticed yet another two way mirror, but no speakers. I stood and almost immediately regretted it. I felt sick.

"Hello," The guy said softly. smiling a bit. He had a mellifluous voice and amazing green eyes. I glared hard at him. "I'm Anders, and I'm your personal guard. I'll be with you pretty much everywhere. Right now, you're in a free-zone. A free-zone is a-"

"Let me guess," I interrupted him harshly. "Where I can use my powers? Yea, right. Like I could use my powers on anything in here. If I used my powers on any power blocking device you have, I would die, you idiot! And, if you expect me to give away my secret weapon you're mistaken, my good sir. So, why don't you just crawl back to yo-"

My words were cut off my his hand slapping me across the face.
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By the way, all my little dears, we each have our own personal guard =3 You can make them however you want to, or even make them a whole new charrie, and post a profile for them.

kthnx! ^_^

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Alura

After pucking on both Nick and Daemyn I had a complete breakdown. Must be the whole pregnancy making me so emotional, I can't help it but I feel like crying all the time.
Daemyn walked towards me as I bawled. He just hugged me tight. Through all the crying and wiping my nose on Daemyns sleeve I didn't notice the guards walking towards us. Daemyn tensed and held me tighter. I looked over, but before I knew it I was pulled away from Daemyn and blindfolded and pushed forward. Before I knew it they took off my blindfold and made me sit on a chair in the middle of a white room with a one way mirror. Creepy, perverts must be watching. I looked over to the right of the room, there in the corner was a camera, a very nice one I might add. I got up and pushed my chair right in front of it and sat down. If they want to stare at me, they can stare at me up close. I smiled.
"You might want to invest in some nicer chairs if you ask me" I said to the camera.
I was waiting for a response, but nobody answered.
I shrugged.
"Anyway, you guys just took me away from my husband and I'm really annoyed. I have an abnormal craving for cheerios, pregnant and maybe just a tad emotional. I mean everybody has their bad days and i'm this close to using explicatives. You know Daemyn likes to curse, I don't. But I guess that's the difference between me and Dae-"
The door creaked.
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Daemyn<

After they took Lurie I got up and tried running after her. Instead of saving my wife, those damned guards tackled me, blindfolded me, and started walking me down twisting hallways. Finally, I was shoved into a room. I took the blindfold off, relieved to see I was alone. Or as alone as I could be with a one way mirror on the wall in front of me and guards outside the door, undoubltedly. All of a sudden, a screen lowered, and I was looking straight into Lurie's beautiful brown eyes. "Lurie?" I whispered, afraid of what they're doing to her.

She was talking to me...or whoever was filimg her, about cheerios and me cussing and then suddenly the door opens behind her and a tall, but muscular guy walks up to her, smiling. he has dark, straight hair that hangs infront of his glasses. He looks like a nerd to me.

"Hello, there," He says, all honey and sugar. I want to punch him in the face. "My name is Elliot. How are you?"
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Alura

I turned around and saw this tall nerd walk in . He walked in front of me.
"Hello, there" He said sweetly,"My name is Elliot. How are you?"
"Seriously? You re asking how I'm doing?" I said as I stood up.
"Yes Lurie, I am" he said as he slowly approached me.
"Um...um, I'm good. If you don't mind me asking, what are you here for?" I asked.
"We are evaluating all of you kids, you know figuring out what you can do and who you are. Do you mind if we start?"
I sat back down on the chair and nodded.
"First Lurie, what is your power?"
I looked up and smiled, "I can make people do stuff, you know like tell you to walk in a certain direction"
"interesting" he wrote this down in his notebook. "You know Lurie I notice your husband is calmer when he's with you, do you mind if we bring him in here?"
I practically jumped out of my chair, "Bring him in!"
Elliot looked at the one way mirror and signaled them.
I wonder how Daemyn will handle this.
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Daemyn<

I jumped up and started pounding on the mirror when I heard they were going to bring me in. "Take me to her!" I yelled, pounding the glass. I heard noise coming from the screen and I jump back in front of it, my eyes open wide. There, hugging my wife, is me.

After the surprise wears off, I scream and yell, pounding on anything I can in the room. I look back at screen, and when I see that...that THING holding my wife's hands and putting his slimy hand on my wife's belly, my baby, my son or daughter, I rip the screen down and then smash it as bad as I can. Guards start pouring into the room, and, without thinking about it, I close my eyes and see the room on fire, black smoke curling around me like a cocoon of all the anger inside of me. I feel heat on my arms and when I open my eyes, the guards are standing there stunned. I breathe in smile as the smoke curls around inside of me. I kick some guards down and run out the door, down the hallway.

As I run blindly forward, I smile viciously, and scream at stunned guards, "I daresay I've had an accident!"
Last edited by xX_white_shadow_Xx on Sat Apr 24, 2010 4:37 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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